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Hi-Fi Rush: Mostly (h)Armless page (15/?)

🕑 Added 2023-06-06 21:18:01 +0000 UTC

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Xannador

Thank you! I’ve been making comics for a long time so most of this stuff comes to me quite naturally. It’s quite easy to guess what could still be a significant game changer in this situation. Something about Chai…

Xannador

I guess even Chai can put two and two together if you put a proverbial gun to his head. Thanks though!

Lysander Croix

Hive mind moment. Those eyes on KEM-N0’s and the other’s eyes are especially creepy now with the gritty, charcoal-like, lines. And oh? What this? Chai deducing something with his brain??!! Blasphemous!

Angel

Aw yes! The tension (and my excitement) is growing with each new page, you do a really great job! I'm not really familiar with storyboarding and comic pacing, but it all feels so natural and it is such a treat to read! What I can praise more substantially is the art though, I love the color contrast between the museum and the hideout and the linework on the robots (especially the big baddie), the eyes not being defined by solid lines looks great! I like the emphasized depth in the upper half of the page too, with the rim lighting and framing. KEM-N0's prism looks awfully spectra-like though, and I have no clue how Chai will handle Z-Shielding without Macaron around. (Maybe *this* time reasoning will work!) Mac carrying CNMN is a cute addition, and the added detail of Peppermint putting her blaster away when she's running is nice too, they're definitely in a hurry! I have no clue what else you're going to add as things look pretty dire as they are, but I'm excited to see what's coming!