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The Curse of Nugget Balls

🕑 Added 2018-11-29 18:01:00 +0000 UTC

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Mr. Monopoly

Thanks for the advice Connor. I do like the idea of a more fleshed out ending. I like the other ending too as it focus's more on the reveal and embracing the moment. Maybe I could polish up the first ending.

Really liked the story. I personally liked the first ending better. It was nice seeing the girls continue to get bigger and finding boyfriends. It feels like a more complete ending. That being said if you were thinking about writing a part two, then the second ending is probably best, since it leaves the story more open ended. Either way keep up the good work.


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