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SCP-5089 fansubmission review
🕑 Added 2018-04-01 21:13:14 +0000 UTC So a few people said not to do another fan submitted SCP but more said they enjoyed it and I agree because it brings something new that no one will have seen before. Also it gets to show people that creativity within the SCP community is still going strong.This SCP was a small but an all around decent SCP. We have a mysterious, seemingly benign, factory that cannot be entered and has music coming out of it. And then a Cadillac that will run you down if you get close to the Factory. Decent.
There wasn't enough backstory I feel, or maybe some exploration or class D experiments to make it an extraordinary SCP file. I think that containing the cars is unnecessary, just contain the area and let them roam. I also think it does not require the Euclid class but the author did state at the end that the SAFE class classification was pending approval so no worries there.
But overall I liked this SCP, it was a short one, had a well rounded story and didn't give too much away to take away from the mystery.
Questions I would ask:
Who drives the cars? What makes them target people? What is going on inside the factory? What is so important about the factory the cars kill anyone who goes near them? Based on the music and the cars age this SCP is very old, why has it been around so long?
What did you think? Let me know below?
Comments
Jared Feiock
I enjoy the fan made ones I think everyone’s a critic so keep it up it shows how engaged you actually are with your subscribers
