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Chapter 106

🕑 Added 2023-06-30 23:43:21 +0000 UTC

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Jay00

Great I hope he riven becomes more gangsta anti/hero

Trent Boehm

Haha well hopefully what happens isn't ENTIRELY obvious, we will see ^.^

Austin Gibbs

Honestly I think the obvious switch arc that your building to is a bit rushed it with all the elven flavor and flag's it seems like sister/elven genocide or conflict is coming really quickly especially with the escaped holy man and his merry band of paladins in the mix the development arc is supposed to make you feel something so all I can say is mission accomplished and I'm looking forward to the pay off of the current loose ends

Trent Boehm

Well this is definitely the kind of stuff that I want to hear as feedback, and yeah it's somewhat supposed to feel that way (but not to an extreme) because it's leading up to a very specific event that changes how Riven looks at the rest of the world for the rest of the entire series. Give it a few more chapters and if at that point, when that event happens, you still think that way about it; I'll put up a poll / ask for input about if I went overboard with this particular route Riven took off his original character.

Kyriakos Stefanakos

You might as well make Allie the MC. You've totally butchered Riven. Seriously, he starts off gangster with a gun blazing and the strong person of a group of three and you have made him some whiney b!tch. You could have him get a full-grown dragon and make him ruler of the universe and he would still suck cause he such a f'in whiney, angst-ridden, dunce. Also, what is with the pauses and the inner monologue during combat where he constantly gets ganked because of it? It's like watching Keanu Reeves where he constantly strikes a pose before he says his lines in "Bill and Ted's Excellent Adventure".


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