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Chapter 190

🕑 Added 2023-10-10 03:39:52 +0000 UTC

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Trent Boehm

crap you're right, thanks! will fix

Catamaran

“There is a saying from his homeworld…” Nitidi, Fay’s mother and “You’re not helping, mother!” Saemi scolded the older succubus. You mixed up the names. Actually you've swaped the names throughout.

Wanheda

Great chapter thanks! I also remember Fay being pretty honest about the situation, could she have tried harder, well yes, but it’s not like I blame her for not trying so hard that she turned riven away. I’m not sure if there was some sort of agreement between Athela and Fay (and if there was then that’s not cool to break that) however I will say that she was pretty upfront that she thought Athela liked him a lot and it was on him that he dismissed it and on Athela that she didn’t make it known earlier (in my opinion) so yes there’s a small amount of blame on Fay but I think she did try.


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