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NEW Chapter 198

🕑 Added 2023-11-27 08:42:49 +0000 UTC

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xRogueCraftx

Maybe just me but I hope he flat picks the scarecrow this time around

Dungeonborn

I also have to say it is a nice to have this short relaxing arc and it should be a lot easier for you to write going forward if you don’t have to differentiate between Riven a/b and he still holds on to Fay which is a BIG improvement Do you plan to have the Wraith (is that some sort of legacy development because of his House Wraithtide?) as a laggy shadow or is it going to learn like some semi intelligent ai which is going to improve and can be trained or alternatively is getting controlled by Rivens subconscious?

Dungeonborn

There are a few parts which you should look over again: Before the demon list: Riven snorted in amusement and shook his head.  “Of course not.  Whatever, I’m gona take a look at this list and we’ll see who is both stupid enough and brave enough to come help us here in the Abyss.  Should be interesting.” And after the list (while the clone is forming): Slowly she began to shake her head, and even Azmoth grunted in curiosity while beginning to ready himself just in case - setting Allie to the side as she slept.


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