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Animation Preview *SOUND WARNING* OMG What the hell?

🕑 Added 2018-02-20 20:20:38 +0000 UTC
Animation Preview *SOUND WARNING* OMG What the hell?

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Anthony Foster

I personally love this; although slowing it down a little would be cool!

Agent Red Girl

I got rid of her erection happening here but will show it a different way.

michael whipps

You can always improve anything....how much is up to you (I think its fine).After a final polish maybe.

Cut back and forth between Mary and Maggie fucking and Bella watching. Each time We see Bella, she is less angry and more aroused. She she pops free, she'd be nearly erect, I think. Not mostly flaccid. Like 7 second mark or so.

The idea of her going from outraged to turned on is really great. I do agree that it's a little too simultaneous in this clip. I'd love to see the transition happen, and her getting harder as she watches, after the initial shock wears off. It would almost be a crime to not let us see her dick slip out of those sporty short shorts.

Agent Red Girl

I think I am going to do a little bit of both...

Or maybe Bella grabs her cock and starts jerking it hard (she's angry) rather than hands-free erection, in this case?

Agent Red Girl

Ok bigwiggy... I guess its back to this scene for a little bit then

Agent Red Girl

Yeah I am going to have to slow it down a lot if I want to include it...

John Dieckman

I think it's fine but it comes up too quick. She should react and then perhaps look away and then back, and then as she starts to get into it she starts slowly getting her erection.

bigwiggy

I'd say include it as Bella standing there wide eyed while saying how wrong it is as she gets hard is really hot!

Agent Red Girl

Should I take the whole erection part out? It doesn't look right to me =/

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