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Animation Preview FEEDBACK NEEDED - Scene's 1 through 7

🕑 Added 2018-04-24 14:20:03 +0000 UTC

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Agent Red Girl

good catch I will fix her tongue. Im not sure about mary getting hard though. she is a little worried right now that she hurt bella.

Darth Pax

Maggies tongue seems too wide when she sticks it out, maybe more pointed/teasing. (Suggestion) maybe add a twitching/bounce/slight hardening to Marys cock when she is talking to bella?

james

awesome keep up the good work cant wait for the 3rd part!!!

Agent Red Girl

thanks james! I fixed that :) she actually isnt in the camera anymore until mary turns to look at her.

james

happy to help!

Frank Celestino

Good call, didn't notice until you pointed it out.

james

The second taunt that maggie does, it doesn't show her left arm up mimicking a blowjob. Is that on purpose?

Agent Red Girl

Ok I might adjust it a little to make it shorter! It will play better once I have Mary's line in there too

Michael Fox

very nice work, only issue i see is the second taunt went on for a few seconds too long

Agent Red Girl

Oh yeah... Maggie is not going to be happy about it for sure lol she is going to be upset =) Maggie doesnt really like Bella all that much and is afraid Bella is going to "steal" her away or something which is part of the reason Maggie approached Mary.

bigwiggy

Looks great to me. And I love the way Bella shakes her head when Maggie is mocking her. But I wonder if it doesn't backfire on Maggie as if you wanted to you could show Maggie's taunting expression turn to one of shock/dumbfounded when Mary tells Bella she can fuck her in any hole she wants. Or perhaps that was Maggie's plan all along? Either way it's great.

Everything looks fantastic! Cant wait to see the whole thing. Definitely looking forward to the larger movie project you mentioned as well! Keep it up!