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AML4 Alternative Script Poll + AML3 Final Rendering at 98%

🕑 Added 2018-08-20 15:28:02 +0000 UTC

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Roger Bond

This. Very much this.

Terry

Hahaha so glad you liked it!

Ciarán M

Good god... what you have just described here is now something that I simply must have 😍😍😍. Here's hoping that we do get to see such a scene.

Terry

In some future script would also love to see a Mary (or other character) do a really nice self suck scene. I keep imagining Mary with the Fleshlight scene you made then at the end tossing the Fleshlight and going into a beautiful self suck scene, gushing a big load in her own mouth, seeing it gush out of her lips and drip down her beautiful cock. 😊

Terry

would love to see a long release then a little pause followed by a little finish stream 😊

Terry

Hi Agent Red Girl! Love the new script! I’m hoping the pee scene is nice and long 🙈

Mikael

Is there still a DP scene planned? By the way, I like both scripts :)

Shadow Kosmos

I like both Agent Red, so whichever one you prefer, go with it. Though I will say since you said above you have another character later that's a dom, I'm cool with keeping it more... "loving and nice" for AML. But like I said, either way is cool with me. I just love your work regardless. Lol Can't tell you how many times I've watched 2 and how much I'm looking forward to 3. Lol. But I digress.

Sgt Mac

I Will Say This Kid! I Looked At The Polls, The Last I Checked, A Newer Version Was Not Needed! But Now, It Is Soft And Cuddly Again, Guess I Missed Something Along The Way. Like I Said In The Beginning , This Is Your Creation. You Will Take It Where You Want It To Go! I Think With Everyone Wanting The Hugs And Kisses. A Family Affair Might Be A Little More Appropriate Title, And Make It PG 13! Good Luck Red--I Mean That! I Am Sure It Will Turn Out Fine. Just Remember ,Do Not Let Compromise ,Overshadow Your Creation, Your Ideas Are Just As Important!--SGT MAC

Spaz strike

I love both, whatever you decide ill be happy with :)

Ciarán M

Thank you very much, I really appreciate that 😄. I generally consider my comments to be inane ramblings so I'm always happy to hear it whenever people like them. Yeah, I'm more than happy to carry on talking with you.

Erica

Damn, you really had to make me like the first scene then make one I like better. Great job. Although I I like the Dom mommy fetish, (and wouldn't mind it) this one is better, I think. Please never stop this great work😊

Futanari Fan

That is what I have always liked about the ABW idea - lots of characters, lots of possible intereactions some of which will appeal more to some than others but plenty of room for manouvre and dipping in and out into characters and miniplots that you might like. And of course the possibility of widening your taste without committing to any one particular fetish or preference.

Futanari Fan

Really happy for you to stick your oar in. I read your comments and I'm always impressed by the detail of your observation and the rationale behind your critiques. So I take it s a compliment that you like my comment. I guess we should maintain our dialogue if you are willing.

Ciarán M

You know, that's an excellent point that I hadn't considered, that as a creator, that it is difficult to open oneself and ones ideas to criticism like Red has done here. Props and a thank you indeed to Red for this and for also taking that criticism on board. I myself did in a previous post say that I didn't mind the more harsh Mary that was initially proposed, but now that I've seen this script revision, I am so much more enthusiastic for it. So a thank you to Red and yourself, Futanari Fan, since we now have this new and improved version of AML4 to look forward to 😄 (I hope you don't mind me sticking my oar in, as it were, with my response 😅, but I liked your comment here quite a bit)

Futanari Fan

Hi Agent Red This version is so, so much better than your original proposal. And I’m really pleased to see that you have taken into count many of the suggestions I made. Thank you. Also I have to say that you are a ‘brave’ creative. It’s not easy to expose ideas to criticism and even harder to back track when you get some negative feedback. So many congratulations. And of course I and all of us, can’t wait to see AML3.

Cwolf

Damn it I like both! Lol

glrider

I think this is the better path to take. It's more "positive" and growth oriented, instead of domineering. I think if you remove "Oh this feels so much better than your ass does Bella.".. just remove it entirely, that part of the script will flow smoother. Give it a read without that statement, and I think you'll agree. That sentence really slows down the pace of the dialogue around it.

Herrz

SERIOUSLY ITS A FUTANARI MOVIE I DONT CARE ABOUT ASHOLE FUCKIN IF THERE IS A PUSSY

Ciarán M

Oh I like this one a whole lot more than the Punished version, the progression with Bella trying to work out how to please Mary, coaxing her back with Mary starting to regain her mood is so sexy to me 😄. From reading this new script, the part that I like the most is Bella jerking her and Maggie's cocks together, with the background description of Mary's own pace in stroking herself quickening 😍😍😍. But wow, Mary, really throwing Bella under the bus with this line "Oh this feels so much better than your ass does Bella" I get the feeling that Bella is very much concerned about Mary perhaps starting to prefer Maggie to her so that line has got to be a blow to her ego 😂. Being serious though, like I said, I much prefer this version of the scenario, to me it's a lot more fun, playful and sexy. And I'm definitely looking forward to the end of the week now with this announcement of AML3's potential release date 😄

Agent Red Girl

Well, part 5 will be more focused on vaginal sex. This part is mainly about the "face fucking" scene. The anal scene here is really short. In part 5, Maggie, Bella, and Mary will all get vaginal cumshots (kinda the big "ending" to the AML series).

Larry Berner

Can we get more vaginal scenes please? With all the anal they do they might as well be newhalf instead of futanari.

Agent Red Girl

OH as a note, Tara from the next series, Amys Big Wish, IS a super mean hyper dom. Most of her scenes will have some form of abusive domination for those who really want to see that.