Patrefans
AgentRedGirl from patreon
AgentRedGirl patreon

Animation Draft + Poll + Progress: Animation 59% (+6%) Final Rendering 33% (+7%)

🕑 Added 2018-10-29 21:21:40 +0000 UTC

Comments

Agent Red Girl

Ok let me add some of that in =)

Mas2

I would suggest here that Maggy looks nervously at Bella than at Mary and back to Bella, take a breath and then concentrate her on peeing. that would help to give her "looking upwards" a bit context.

bigwiggy

It does, but maybe have Maggie thrust her hips towards Bella at the beginning of the clip, then when Bella says her dialogue it would emphasize that Maggie's trying to pee? Not sure if that's an improvement as it's a difficult thing to convey. What do other people think?

Agent Red Girl

Yeah I was thinking she is trying to concentrate on peeing and feels a little akward. Does that make sense?

glrider

Here's a challenge for you. Start from behind Bella, looking over her head, as the shower starts. Then pan around to the side, then up, and then from Maggies POV. All the while, the shower is going.

bigwiggy

I noticed Maggie seems to be looking up at the ceiling at the beginning of this clip which looks kind of odd.

Ciarán M

Oh this is an easy choice for me, the Top angle is so damned sexy! The view of Maggie is fantastic with the foreshortening of her body, her breasts and hard nipples protruding forth from above with a gorgeous view of her plump arse from behind 😻😻😻. While the view of Bella is equally sexy as she cups her breasts with that hard cock curving upwards 😋.

Kennyannydenny

Looks good so far. I'd go with either top or hybrid. I do really like the idea of seeing Bella's penis throb whilst being peed on!


More Creators