AgentRedGirl
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Animation Preview - Need Feedback/Ideas + Progress = 65%
🕑 Added 2018-10-31 18:20:03 +0000 UTC Hello! So, I working on the "golden shower scene". As of now, its unfinished but I would still love any feedback or ideas you have for this section before I finalize it. Feel free to nit pick or whatever... I just want to make sure this looks good =)Direct Link: https://www.dropbox.com/s/tvud0slrw9o1a31/Scene28.mp4?dl=0
I think I am going to add in Maggie "pulling" on her penis a little toward the end. Also, I kinda think maybe Bella is moving around a little too much but I dunno... let me know your thoughts.
Also, we are nearing the first surprise section and I cant wait to get started on it. I will be sharing the animation previews for it so everyone will know whats happening.
AML4 - Animation Progress = 65% (+6%), Final Rendering = 33%
- 40-530 - (Need Render) Intro
- Scene 1 through Scene 14 = (Done)
- 2195-2500 = (Need Render) Bella's face during creampiefireworks
- Scene 16 = (Done)
- Up Next: Bella cleaning up Maggie's ass, pussy, cum eating and dirty talk
- Scene 18 = (Done)
- 3100-3300 = (Need Render) Oh my god Bella look at her nuts
- 3330-3500 = (Need Render) Maggie awkwardly declares shehas to pee
- Scene 21 = (Done)
- 3505-3750 = (Need Render) Pee on my face... :(
- 3800-3990 = (Need Render) Maggie wtf? Seriously?
- 3400-3720 = (Need Render) Bella porn star pee request!
- 3720-4100 = (Need Render) Maggie says OK + small surprise
- 3800-4100 = (Need Render) Maggie trying to pee
- 4100-4700 = (Need Simulation) Bella's Golden Shower
- Up Next: Kissing + Cock Snoodling
- Up Next: Surprise 1 - Part 1
- Up Next: Surprise 1 - Part 2
- Up Next: Surprise 1 - Part 3
- Up Next: Surprise 1 - Part 4
- Up Next: Mary face fucking Maggie (I will add more when I getcloser to this section)
- Up Next: Maggie ass fucking Mary
- Up Next: Surprise 2 - Part 1
- Up Next: Surprise 2 - Part 2
- Up Next: Surprise 2 - Part 3
- Up Next: Surprise 2 - Part 4
Comments
Teecee
I really like this. More please
Agent Red Girl
The orgasms and cumshot will follow shortly after =)
Arthur Ziskey
I think you have a solid gameplan... I'm not much for watersports, but I suspect this will work for those who are. I also like your idea of a bit of stroking at the end, maybe even some massive orgasms/ cum shots to finish it out?
bigwiggy
Looks like Bella's really getting into it.
terry mcneil
I think Bella's movement is fine/natural. Think of what its like to wait in anticipation for something So special. Seconds seem to take an hour...very hard to sit still!!!!
bobby stronzheim
Thanks Red, good to hear
Agent Red Girl
Heya bobby! Yes, we will see plenty of squirting and I do plan to add some more lactation stuff in as well. There may not be anymore lactation stuff in AML but I have a super awesome lactation scene planned for Amys Big Wish!
bobby stronzheim
Oh and also, most likely not in this scene, but are we going to see some more squirting while cumming and/or lactation stuff? :o
Agent Red Girl
Ok sounds good =) I can add in the tongue fairly easily! You wont really see Maggies head in this once it renders but I can add a relieved look to her face in the next scene
bobby stronzheim
If i were to be a nitpicker/idea generator I'd say maybe have bella stick her tongue out for some of it? The tugging as others have said would be a great addition as well. Bella twitching is also excellent since it is what I consider part of "your style" which is a good thing! maybe have Maggie tilt her head back a tad too in relief. That being said this scene is going to be amazing and everything you've done so far has been top notch. Keep it up :D
Kennyannydenny
I love this, looks awesome. I agree on the pulling for Maggie but Bella seems good, really love that you implemented the throbbing of her penis!
CiarΓ‘n M
Oh my god... this is surprisingly very, very hot! πΉπ»π»π»π» The way Bella's cock twitches and pulses throughout, ending with her starting to stroke it and smiling up at Maggie are just so sexy to me! Personally, I think that Bella's movements here all look perfectly fine and that she's moving around a natural amount, especially given what's going to be happening in the final animation πΉ. Great work on this one, Red (seriously, so hot! π₯π₯π»π») Looking forward to seeing more πΈ
I agree with Maggie needing to be pulling on her penis, maybe to get the last drop out? Bella seems fine to me particularly the twitching.
Jeffrey Adams
Looks good thus far however will be a bit easier to say once a fluid simulation is added so you can see it in comparison to bellas reactions.
baby ryan
I love how her penis is twitching!
