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Animation Preview - Scene 12 - Please... Dont Stop!

🕑 Added 2019-03-18 20:09:09 +0000 UTC

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Mas2

Jeez, nowIhave things in my head like "A fat woman walked the shoe store today. She was so fat she had 3 smaller women orbiting her."

Agent Red Girl

Lol i will make Marys booty super flat and small going forward 😭

John McCarthy

I noticed some thing ... some thing real big and round and out there , that but ! is it me or is that just a little tooooo big ... she 's going to need a area code ... or mud flaps ...

Ciarán M

Oh, well alrighty then! That's great to hear, Red! Fortunately, the majority of the time, I don't notice anything wrong in the previews and even now, this thing with Mary's motion is only a small thing and so hopefully easy to change 😸.

Agent Red Girl

Please dont ever feel bad about leaving me criticism. I love having additional eyes and thoughts on these scenes so that they look their best. If you notice something, chances are plenty of other people will notice it too. So, always let me know if something doesn't look right... id rather take the time to fix something so it looks its best than miss something and distract from the animation because of it =)

Ciarán M

Howdy, I always feel kind of like a dick when I leave criticism 😅, so I'm glad you don't mind! I watched the preview again and yes, there is a sway but honestly, I had to really concentrate to see it. But I think just a little more motion to it will be enough to add that touch of life to Mary. And I have often said in the past that one of the things that makes your work so good is how lively the characters feel with tonnes of little details that show that, like how they breathe and all of the subtle little movements that go along with that. As always, looking forward to seeing more! Especially of Bella 😉💙💙

Agent Red Girl

Well, Mary is swaying but maybe I made it too subtle... I will add a little bit more movement to her though so its more noticable

Ciarán M

Damn, Maggie sounds so desperate for that cock! 😹 Well, who can blame her, I suppose, it does look tasty after all 😉 I do like the angle a lot here with Mary's big booty looming in the foreground, with the teasing of her cock rising up from in front of her. The view of Maggie looks utterly delightful too with a full viewing of her heaving breasts and elongated stomach as she sways up and down with her breathing. I do also enjoy the rounded contours of her own rather voluptuous booty, as well as her hands on her spreading thighs and her own cock nestled between them. The last little moment of Maggie leaning forward, letting out her tongue with her cock flexing is just so super naughty and sexy too, definitely a hot detail and does a good job of showing off her enthusiasm. One small thing, Mary here looks oddly static, like she's standing a little too still. Maybe she could be swaying ever so slightly as she breathes, or she could move her hand around or her cock could flex too. Maggie is absolutely full of life here while Mary is still like a statue and maybe it's just me, but that just looks a bit strange 😅. Either way, great work once again, Red, I like the angle we see Mary from as well as all of Maggie's movements.