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VERY ROUGH DRAFT - Animation Preview - Position 2
🕑 Added 2019-03-22 19:48:57 +0000 UTCOK so... this is a really tough one! It has been very difficult to get this scene setup but I have the bulk of the "primary" motion completed. I plan to show this from 2 different angles so this preview is a little bit of both angles.
Dropbox: https://www.dropbox.com/s/hm4r4kjvgfu16y6/Scene14DRAFT.mp4?dl=0
Google Drive: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1LfA0jfB2kq3R75F1yeQoshrLfbRyrwRZ
Now, I am going through and working on fixing all the details. Then, I will be going in and add secondary motion. Here are some of my notes on what I am still working on. Please feel free to provide any feedback or thoughts on this section =)
To be honest his scene will take me at least 1 more full entire day of work if not 2 due to all the details I am trying to add but in the end I believe it will look really nice!
Notes (to do list):
- Finish cock/mouth animations
- Fix Maggie's knees/thighs/butt shapes
- Add facial expressions
- Add secondary motion (IE: Mary moving her head back/moaning/sticking tongue out)
- Add animation for Marys boobs
- Fix hands (Mary squeezing Maggies boobs)
- Add grool/precum to Maggie
- Add cock flexing to Maggie
- Add a little saliva/tears going down Maggies face
- Make Marys ass spread and jiggle as she moves up and down
- Make Marys balls smack against Maggies face (going to try something new here to make this look really nice)
Animation Progress 55%
- Scene 1 -10 - (Done)
- Scene 11 (Done)
- Scene 12 (Done)
- Scene 14 (70-364) Rendering - Bella's kitchen tantrum part 1
- Scene 15 (206-434) WIP - Face fucking position #2
- Sceen 16 (246-434) WIP - Face fucking position angle 2
- Scene 17 - Bella's kitchen tantrum part 2
- Scene 18 - Face fucking position #3 start
- Scene 19 - Face fucking position #3 ultra hard
- Scene 20 - Face fucking Marys cumming part 1
- Scene 22 - Face fucking Mary cumming part 2
- Scene 23 - I love you!
- Scene 24 - Can I stick my dick in your butt?
- Scene 25 - MAGGIE LYNN??
- Scene 26 - Ok ok just dont be rough with me
- Scene 27 - *NEW* - Maggie eating out Marys ass, pussy, clit
- Scene 28 - Bella's kitchen tantrum cum shot
- Scene 29 - Anna sees Bella jacking off on the chicken
- Scene 30 - Maggie cums
- Scene 31 - Bella walks in on Maggie inside Marys ass (ORIGINAL ENDING)
- Scene Bonus (MAYBE) - Mary - Wow Bella this chicken is great! (ALTERNATIVE ENDING)
Comments
Hanna Andersson
Oh my goodness. This is super. And I'm really excited about the fact that this is going to get even tougher a few scenes down the road of fun. I love the mix of cute and rough rawness.
RichTheRed
Wow, wow, wow. Seriously hot. Only detail that looked strange (after numerous views) is Maggie's eye lashes or eye brows, something strange going on there.
bigwiggy
I'm with Ciaran as that's a great scene even as is so I can't imagine how good it will look when it's done!
CiarΓ‘n M
Goodness me! This is so damned hot! The opening angle and poses for each of them look incredible, particularly sexy details are Mary's smile showing her enjoyment as well as her fingers wrapped over Maggie's breasts. I also love the way Maggie's thighs are spread with a teasing of her pussy as her rock hard cock rises. That thrusting motion for Mary looks so appealing and sensual, great job there! I can't wait to see this scene again when you've added in the features that you have listed. There's so many things there that will make this truly incredible. The things im most eager for are Mary's facial expressions and throwing her head back as she moans, the jiggling of her breasts and bum (maybe we'll get a cheeky peek at her little booty hole as the cheeks jiggle and spread π) and of course, Maggie's hard cock flexing and leaking tasty, sweet precum π. I will say that I agree with Caman and glrider, maybe slightly slow down the speed of the thrusting. Unless of course you're planning on the scene starting slow and building up to this speed. Also I like glriders suggestion of continuing to pan the camera around to the rear angle instead of jump cutting. But god damn, Red! Great work so far! πππππ I am always so excited to see more as AML4+ is looking like it could be my favourite episode so far! π»π»π»
glrider
Interesting... I like the scene. It's just my opinion, I like the pan circling around, but I think it might be better if the pan continues moving around until it gets to seeing our characters from the rear. Instead of cutting to it, continue the pan and arrive to it. The cut is a little too abrupt. Just a nit-pick, and just my opinion and suggestion.
Jmanz32
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Kennyannydenny
Awesome, looks great!
Caman
Great work Red!!!
Caman
This scene is very erotic. Best angle and view so far. Only feedback is to slow down the pumping. Its almost distracting it is so fast.
Red girl fan
Love this scene puond that throat lol had to loop it lol fapfapfap π
The Bam man
Just seeing this scene, i could already tell this is going to be my favorite episode. Love this, 10/10 from me.
