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Animation Preview - ** ROUGH DRAFT ** Final Position Part #1 *Feedback Requested*
🕑 Added 2019-04-02 19:35:44 +0000 UTCHello all! I am sorry I wasnt able to get much done yesterday because I was out all day tying up some things for my old job and my personal life. BUT I will be animating all day everyday all week =)
Any who, this is a VERY ROUGH DRAFT but showcases the basic camera angle and the basic motion of this scene. I still have a lot to do but would love some feedback on what you think and if possible take a look at my notes and let me know what you think of them as well.
Dropbox Link: https://www.dropbox.com/s/gtcyisn3q67t9do/Scene17DRAFT.mp4?dl=0
Google Drive Link: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1kHJ-zVm3LysVfsl50_N_BvMDfSLpHKU9
I really want get some really fun details fit into this scene so I might not have it done until Wednesday but I will try to get it done tomorrow.
TODO List (Notes)
- Add more bounce to Marys balls
- Possibly speed things up a little???
- Add dynamics to Marys boobs
- Fix Maggies mouth a little (on the "in" position)
- Fix Marys tummy
- Add facial expressions
- Add vaginal fluids coming out of Mary
- Add a little make up streaking down Maggies face
- Add a few saliva strands coming out of Maggies mouth
- (2nd camera angle) add squirming to Maggies body
- (2nd camera angle) add arching and tilting of Marys head
2nd Camera Angle Preview
Animation Progress 68%
- Scene 1 -16
- Scene 17 (70-480) Bella's kitchen tantrum part 2
- Scene 18 (3250-3490) - WIP - Face fucking position #3 start
- Scene 19 (3250-3490) - WIP - Alternate Camera Angle
- Scene 20 - Bella's evil plan!!!
- Scene 21 - Face fucking position #3 ultra hard
- Scene 22 - Face fucking Marys cumming part 1
- Scene 23 - Face fucking Mary cumming part 2
- Scene 24 - I love you!
- Scene 25 - Can I stick my dick in your butt?
- Scene 26 - MAGGIE LYNN??
- Scene 27 - Ok ok just dont be rough with me
- Scene 28 - *NEW* - Maggie eating out Marys ass, pussy, clit
- Scene 29 - Bella's kitchen tantrum cum shot
- Scene 30 - Anna sees Bella jacking off on the chicken
- Scene 30 - Maggie cums
- Scene 31 - Bella walks in on Maggie inside Marys ass (ORIGINAL ENDING)
- Scene Bonus (MAYBE) - Mary - Wow Bella this chicken is great! (ALTERNATIVE ENDING)
Comments
Lobo
Shit, I'm getting horny just reading this.
Roger Bond
Ooh, and at this angle, Mary could lean down and such Maggie's cock a little bit while she's up there.
CXGKjP
Maybe Maggie could hold Mary's balls or squeeze them ... that's a good way to make a man cum ... I guess Futas are the same?
Red girl fan
Don't forget Maggie's hair should be droped down
Sandpaper
π€ what about Maggie holding on to Mary's ass a bit?
John McCarthy
"" HEY RED "" with that bonus are we getting fries with that ...
Roger Bond
Oh look at that, you took my advice about this position! Sure hope you do the same for my cumshot suggestion /nudge /nudge
CiarΓ‘n M
Hoooo-weeeee! π»π»π»π»π» The actual motion of Mary thrusting into Maggie's mouth looks fantastic! I absolutely love the angle here with the foreshortened view of Mary's body and how we see her face peeking out from over her ample breasts, I also like the sneaky view of her bush poking out from behind her cock. And the upward shot of her open thighs, big balls dangling down, her hard clit and spread out bum-cheeks are all delicious! When it already looks this good, I can't imagine how fantastic it'll be once the extra touches are added, I do love that even in this "rough draft", the motion of Mary's delectable balls swaying back and forth is already there. The additions of various juices will be totally delicious too! The secondary camera angle is just so incredibly appealing too, I adore the view of Maggie's full body with her closed pussy between her squirming legs, as well as the way her balls are spreading outward, that in particular being a great little detail. Similarly, her breasts spreading out over her chest is very well done too. And as with the previous angle, the foreshortened view of Mary's voluptuous body is so appealing with her huge breasts hanging down with the curves of her bum protruding out from behind. I can not wait to see this second angle when it's in motion! π»π»π»π»π» I am also very pleased that you're going to incorporate fortono's idea of having Mary grab a hold of Maggie's cock too! That will just be too sexy!
Agent Red Girl
I will have Mary grabbing Maggies cock during the "ultra" hard and cumming scenes for sure! :)
fortono
I would like to see as she is fucking her face that she grabs you cock and rubs her and possible Cummings together.
