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Action Toys page 24
🕑 Added 2024-02-08 16:44:33 +0000 UTCDoes this comic really need this scene? Probably not...
But I just wanted to animate a little dance and no one can stop me =)
Proper size is in attachments, Patreon resize gifs and mess them up in the process.
Like I said comics going in directions people probably didn't expect =)
Previous 2 pages have slight edits on them, mostly design related: bubles in 22th page is without black outlines now and I added a "visible music" on page 23.
Next page is NOT animated, or at least not fully. Initially I planned to make 2 dance animations, with a second being more complicated and also with frame-by-frame animated elements, but I droped this idea and will experiment with traditional animation some other time.
Comments
Behrad Bagheri
ππ
SanePerson
later this week, most likely on the weekend
Behrad Bagheri
when we'll see the next page π₯²?
jerry jerome
That makes sense. Wonder if thatβs why anime gag scenes donβt usually show them getting gagged.
HotDog89
Thank you!
engagecrayfish0
https://www.tiktok.com/t/ZT8c39sMP/
kou32
I really love the animation, simple but very fluid. Especially the expression work on raven as it shifts.
SanePerson
well, good luck on your journey into animation =)
HotDog89
Iβve started practicing with animation lately, mostly sticking with lineart for now, and this must have been pretty in depth!
A fan
After just a break and costume change, Raven already rebelling again. Well, not outright, rather dancing mockingly. Yeah, she wouldn't go down easily.
Vysirez
Said too many attempts when I tried. I'll try again later.
Shremedy
On the other hand, Star may start showing Raven some moves, to help her. Or advice like "move your whole body. not just your hips". CF hasn't forbidden her to do so
SanePerson
Also I have a scene much later where StarFire in a sweet maner will tell CF that if he really harm Raven, then "No-Kill-Rule will be off and you will die =)"
SanePerson
This kind of style require to be less detailed, so in a smaller panels I don't draw smaller elements
SanePerson
I can, but that will require frame-by-frame animation, which would take a long time.
SanePerson
He is not harming Raven, he just bump the settings of Raven's belt for a short time. It's hard to convey this in one panel, but previously I drscribed that belts do not inflict direct pain.
jerry jerome
wow. if only you could animate gag scenes
Second of Many
Hot dance! Bondage and dancing go well, especially when animated! And the animation is great. Loof forward to what dance she'll do next page
Shremedy
Maybe this one will match a bit better? youtube.com/shorts/W8MhZVbx6uI Coming as it does from the kpop realm, CF should love it!
SeaGull (aka FriendlyFire)
Nice work. He better remember that Star is right there next to him and she might react a little negatively to how he's 'encouraging' Raven to improve, he was rather careless during the first session after all.
IvyReed
I need the comic to have this scene, and that should be more than enough!
Necromanzer
It's nice-ish, yeah
Chloe
We need more raven dancing
s22132
Another amazing job.
Shremedy
How about this? A little old, and not Disney, but its just about the right tempo -- youtube.com/shorts/v8Lf8Smj1J4
Trevor Bond
If you wanna animate a little dance, you go right ahead lol!
Mobsterkingpin
yo that pose in the punish panel is *chef's kiss*
Shremedy
I'd like to suggest a couple of minor tweaks to the art, if I may. Both of these are for the inset panel where Raven is getting jolted. 1. If her top is sheer enough to even partially show her aureoles in the main frame, it should also be in the inset. 2. How about (involuntary) pokies as a reaction to the jolt going up her spine? They're kind of there in the main frame as well.
Aidenke
Another delightful page -- love the sense of humor it has, and the encouragement for Raven to get a little more creative.
Necromanzer
Found one: https://youtu.be/2tkIdfhg2E4?t=34
SanePerson
General idea is that while they are in a Disney movie (or any movie) they can hear the soundtrack. So basically pick a more fitting Aladdin tune)
Necromanzer
Is there any kind of song you had in mind playing for her to dance to? ^^
Xianroberts
These animated panels are so impressive. It's already so good but this is just over the top fantastic.
Hatchet
Wow! and what's next with some motivation and effort?! Nice and cute animation, Bravo :)
The Mu
Will this be the "boost" Raven need? π
SanePerson
I don't know all tik tok dances )
engagecrayfish0
I figured she'd do the girly pop metal dance from goth TikTok! π
Dashole
Very cute!! π
Cristeal
That was mesmerizing, but I agree, she could do better
TheMillersThree
that animation is incredible, very impressive!
