SanePerson
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Action Toys page 27
🕑 Added 2024-03-15 12:18:30 +0000 UTCInitial Raven line were: "That bastard didn't deserve such a lavish death..."
2 versions of this page, version 2 were first one, but then I get an idea to light up Star hair while she overemotional, and drew verion 1. But maybe it's a little over the top and not very clear on what happening, so I left both versions. Later on I will pick one =)
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https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fo/mg2bwx23t8xtskk77zz2c/h?rlkey=e8dl6cxapluawl4rhjo1zfva2&dl=0
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I said that I gonna do both Action Toys and Gwens picture together, but currently I rushing to finish this part of a comics, so I can finalize it and post it outside of Patreon and outside of a passworded folder. Then I will focus on Gwens.
One page left, should be even quicker to draw then this one.
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bones
Will she be able to hold it together? π€
Bob Jenkins
The password isnβt working for Dropbox for some reason
Shremedy
UPDATE: Gumroad MAY have relented to the point of allowing direct checking account payment for NSFW, just NOT PAYPAL or STRIPE. I need to get back on Twitter to get more details!
Shremedy
The way PPal keeps changing their policies, willy-nilly, is making it almost impossible to remain in compliance. But yeah, do your best. My message is more for fellow Patrons out here, rather than Creators. I'm gearing up to delete my PPal, shifting my payment method here is the first step of that
SanePerson
I use Payoneer, but also I planned to do some cleansing of my art posted on patreon, to reduce the chance i can be banned from it
Shremedy
ππππππ: πππππππ ππππ ππππ ππ ππππππππππ! ππ πππ πππ ππππππ ππππ ππππππ ππ πππ ππππππππ ππ π ππππ. IF YOU CAN. Gumroad folded to PAYPAL pressure and banned ALL NSFW ART. Snap of fingers, GONE. You own NOTHING any more! That's 100% of everything I ever bought there! And 100% of everything I buy here! If you reduce the amount of money Paypal brings here, by paying directly, you reduce the amount of leverage PAYPAL has on THIS platform, and maybe keep (fun!) NSFW content alive (unlike poor, doomed Gumroad)
SanePerson
yeah, point that goal can be unobtainable by purpose is legit, but storywise it needed to be obtainable and require not that long time (comics where they spend years serving CF would get boring)
SM
Nice bit there with the negative space on the bottom panel. I see what ya did there ;)
The Mu
Meanwhile, Raven may be punished for stopping when she wasn't told to.
engagecrayfish0
Ravens should subtract 4000 for stopping early π
engagecrayfish0
I mean to be fair if I was control freak and had starfire giving out blowjobs for 4000 points Iβd make the number quite high π
HotDog89
For someone like Control Freak, making the goal unattainable may be the point. Of course, he canβt let it seem unattainable, or else the girls might be harder to manipulate. Maybe he can take away points on a whim. Moving the goal post.
SanePerson
I actually think that I need to up her numbers for outstanding performance, else million points would be quite an unobtainable goal
TheGag
And I'm glad CF is still alive! π It's too early not to continue enjoying this couple... although, if the A.I. takes care of entertaining/punishing them for a while, I'd bet they'll both miss that little pervert, especially seeing how it's made Star sweat!
TheGag
I vote for the 'hair on fire' version β€οΈβπ₯ Maybe if the lowest part of the hair has a light up touch too, will be a little less ambiguous. And if you added an onomatopoeia indicating her "fire up state", like 'πΊπΎπΆπΆπΆπΊπ―' or similar, it would be a second indication.
engagecrayfish0
Wait didnβt he say they needed like a million pointsβ¦.carry the 2β¦..lotta blow jobs π
A fan
Might as well let Starfire live up to her name. She sees stars and feels on fire.
HotDog89
I like the backlight on her hair, itβs a nice, subtle indication of her heightened arousal.
Dashole
Noice!!
Momo Trotro
Amazing expressions in this one! Great page^^
