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Pee-Shy: Deadlock!
🕑 Added 2023-01-31 03:32:12 +0000 UTCEdit: Changed the Dialogue to be (hopefully) less-clunky! The old version's still there for posterity too, though, lol! XD
Oooh, looks like they're about to have to settle in for a very uncomfortable exam! :P
This idea seemed best suited to a comic, since it involved a bit of explanatory set-up, so I hope I managed to pull that off for you guys! I can already very easily see continuing this with them both giving up and having to "fake" having peed before heading to their exam (as per ratcat's suggestion)!
Anyway, I might also have something planned specifically for those of you who like a fluffier variety of content in addition to more pages of the continued torturing of Dakota's VERY full bladder! And I also really ought to show Pit-Stop some love after all this time...
Man, these girls sure are busy with all this NOT peeing --- so busy, in fact, that I don't think they have time for a pee break! X3
Comments
Amiee1337
I’m melting.:…
Jailor Eckman
Imagine that their very obvious wriggling causes the class to torment them until they crack! The swishing of water bottles... whispers of rainstorms and roaring rivers... And of course, when they do finally let go, there's a classroom full of cameras waiting to catch every glistening drop! :3
Jailor Eckman
She's outside the stalls and noticed the other girl's feet. Or maybe even caught a better glance through the slit between the door and the stall wall :0 XD
ratcat
This is so hot, I love it!
Admiral Casual
Who wins? Well... the students in the next class they're attending. Someone get a mop. Clean up on aisle panties!
Eisotopius
Well, there's an idea for next month.
omega21
Haha, nice work dude! Actually what's purple girl doing in the third panel - I suppose she's just walked into the stall and hasn't undressed yet
Jailor Eckman
Oooh, that's a way more succinct way of putting it! I redid the dialogue with that in mind and pared it back to hopefully make it less "clunky"!
omega21
Maybe the first panel could just have been something like, "Finally there's nobody else, I can't hold it much longer"! No worries though, it's a difficult situation to explain lol
omega21
That's super hot, I like your idea of them having a hard time limit before the next exam haha Even though it'd also be fun to have them wait until one or both breaks down, hmmm...
Jailor Eckman
Yeah, I think my writing ended up being way too over-explanatory and clunky. I didn't think it was obvious enough that she *hadn't* gone yet in the first panel... But man, thinking on it now, I probably could've gotten away with a "Wait! No!--- I didn't get to pee!" In the second panel or something!
Eisotopius
I think that ended up being a little *too much* explanation in the first panel, since the following three do a good job covering the "because" section - but anyways time to figure out who these girls are and get them on the big chart along with everyone else.
