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Poem ASMR: The type of lover I need
🕑 Added 2021-10-05 15:55:07 +0000 UTCi need someone
who knows struggle
as well as i do
someone
willing to hold my feet in their lap
on days it is too difficult to stand
the type of person who gives
exactly what i need
before i even know i need it
the type of lover who hears me
even when i do not speak
is the type of understanding
i demand
Comments
Andie
Omg RIGHT??
Oooooh your voice is deeper with english.... π¦ First I can't focus on the poem because of your voice. I had to listen several times π
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I replayed it a couple of times.. I really like this one ππ€
Megan
You did so so well, Will. I'm so in awe of people who are able to speak more than one language, and who strive to add inflection and emotion into it. Poetry is hard in your own language, so for you to recite this in English and to do it so well, it's incredible. There was only really one sentence I could see that you could have changed where you paused, but overall I was so inspired listening to this. I'm very proud of you, and you should be too. π
Andie
"willing to hold my feet in their lap on days it is too difficult to stand" Ooohh~ did you write this? This is such a great line! π― (Maybe it's the line breaks, but I thought this was a Rupi Kaur poem at first LOL) π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°
Tbh I read the poem itself without your voice first. I liked the meaning of it but it didn't make me think deeper somehow..? So actually when I heard you reading it, I enjoyed the poem way more! Your pauses made me think about how you might have interpreted the poem.. I actually really loved that and thought it was very interesting! π― Thank you so much, Will π I'm looking forward to the next one already! π€π« PS: If the type of lover you need is like the one described in the poem it must be a very beautiful person.
π₯Ί this was really cute~ The poem and your voice where lovely π₯° you did very well. I hope youβll keep trying more like this and youβll get the hang of it in no time. π€
I love it! It's really nice to hear you reading poems in English, Will! ππ And really sweet of you to try something like this for us ~ π₯Ί The rhythm is a tiny bit off but you still did really well!! Next time will be even better!!
