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Missed Update / The Long Forgotten NTO Novelization
🕑 Added 2018-08-27 15:19:42 +0000 UTC I wanted to take a second to mark and apologize for yesterday's missed update; summer vacation is almost over and I haven't done a fraction of what I wanted with my son, but this weekend I bailed on comics to take him to a Lego convention and to some parks and playgrounds we've never explored. For what it's worth, when he's back in school after Labor Day weekend (coming up here real fast :( ) I expect to not only get my updates more on track again but also, possibly, hopefully, rebuild my buffer for the first time since I had him: this will be the first year he's in school full time.In lieu of an update, I wanted to revisit with you something I started and put aside almost as long ago as the comic: the prose version of Next Town Over.
Started just after the comic mostly as a way to keep myself interested in the story over what I already knew was going to be a long illustrative haul (but man I underestimated it, even so), if you own a hardcover version of NTO Book 1 there is an excerpt of an excerpt from it at the very back as a little something extra; here that is, along with slightly more from my rough draft of the chapter roughly analogous to the comic's #1, Lookback.
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If you’d known who it was who’d died you’d be surprised at how few folks had gathered, and shocked by their gathering around a big timber pyre rather than a well-appointed plot in the little church graveyard some fifty yards off. Then again, maybe you wouldn’t have been surprised; if you’d known the individual in the simplish pine box capping the pyre for the same reason everyone else did you’dve known where the rest of the town was at, and you’dve known the creeping, paranoid fear that had them burning this corpse instead of burying it as they might have liked to.
Genuine, deferent sorrow was certainly in no short supply: people had carpeted the bark slopes of the pyre with wildflower bouquets gathered in tribute. The thing was a mound of blossoms, snow-capped with an extravagant spray of white roses draped over the coffin lid.
A balding, partridge-shaped preacher in black, prayer book in one hand, sopped some of the sweat from his brow with the other before tucking away his handkerchief and reaching sort of timidly for the torch being offered in his general direction by a man with his chin on his chest, snuffling into his doffed cap.
For all his age and experience the preacher had never set fire to a corpse before. He had his misgivings, steeped in stories of uneven heat tightening all the muscle and sinew and fleshly mechanick of the dead and causing them to twist or thrash or sit bolt upright. He dwelled on this and hoped that rose-frosted casket was nailed shut but good.
Through eulogizing, the preacher reached out to set fire to the timber, fumbling with his prayer-book hand to keep his sleeve well away from the flames. He stepped back as the pyre caught, yellow flame twining up through clumps of daisies and phlox toward the nicely-fitted pine box. Eventually the fire got its teeth into that, too.
A renewed round of moaning from those in attendance was cut short by the thunder-crack sound of the coffin very literally exploding as if they’d gathered to lay to rest 150 pounds of black powder. The sides of the box blew open on a blossoming surf of flames, raining splinters, ash, and expensive finishing nails on scattering, screaming mourners.
The preacher fainted, crumpling amongst scattered timber and spreading fire in a limp black heap. It was probably for the best.
The central fireball that had ripped apart the coffin discharged radially; waves of fire swept outward to consume the churchyard. At its former epicenter, amongst the disheveled chunks of char that had been a neatly stacked pyre just seconds previously, rose a figure, wholly enveloped in flame and screaming, loud enough to clear the heights of the fire’s foundation roar. Robed in flames and writhing as this form was, if you’d known who it was who’d died you’d have plainly recognized it.
* * *
It was early evening when the big gray stallion crested the last ridge before Lookback, a small but clean cowtown at the floor of a gentle, wide open valley: the easternmost fringe of the western wilds. This was the first place free ranging cattle had been in evidence, wandering and foraging the rolling, grassy drumlins amongst spare, scattered cedars and their long purple shadows.
Lookback itself was a low-built, vaguely T-shaped collection of pine buildings, bordering on rustic. Nary a brick in sight.
The stallion’s rider was mostly hidden under a fibrous gray cloak that might have been wool, but, then again, might have been something else. Even under its voluminous folds it was a good bet the frame beneath belonged to a woman, and a small, girlishly built woman at that. It took a look under her wide-brimmed black hat, at her sharp features and hot, unusual orange eyes gleaming from dark, tired sockets to verify that she was grown; not just grown, but tapped-out looking and pale as death: a sick-and-tired thirty years if she was a day. Possibly she was pretty, after a fashion, but it was difficult to say: she was strange, and had taken no clear care of herself in some time. She had the kind of red hair folks are wont to liken to flames and sunset and autumn, but it was short-cropped and dirty, clinging together in knifish clumps.
The gray stallion, whose name was Diamonds (probably so-named for the white star on his forehead and the matching snip on his right nostril) stopped at the crest, intuiting his rider’s want to reconnoiter Lookback from this perfect vantage point. He knew who he was carrying, and he knew who she was after—who they were both after.
From his back she surveyed the town’s two loosely-suggested intersecting streets and found what was undoubtedly a hotel, very probably a saloon besides, built on one of the T’s inside corners. It was the biggest structure down there, with two smoking fieldstone chimneys and signage out front extending upward well beyond the reach of its relatively ostentatious two storeys. Undoubtedly that’s where he’d be.
A slight shift in her mean weight signaled Diamonds to move on.
Veronique Dauterive would have looked perfectly inconspicuous at the opera house in Red Fork, or in the dining room of a steamboat on the big river, or even greeting guests at a brothel; such was her extravagant, immodest red getup, all crunching red taffeta and scarlet lace sprinkled with garnet beadwork and punctuated by a pendant featuring an obscenely large red stone. It was of a perfect length to nestle indiscreetly between her corset-boosted, twenty-year-old breasts, drawing the eye unfailingly to all three. As if she didn’t look absurd enough by herself in Lookback’s little saloon, she was flanked by two enormous bodyguards. They were distant cousins of hers but you wouldn’t have known to look at them. Veronique was small, blonde and green-eyed and tan as she was (conspicuously, new-money tan like she’d been picking cotton up until last week) she was still clearly from fair stock, whereas the men at her sides were each black and solidly built as locomotives. They were also far more intent on the onlookers surrounding their little trio than Veronique herself. She had eyes only for the cowboy across from her, who reeked of sweat and of horses but had just spread an impressive full house across the table: aces full of fives.
Veronique’s painted lips broadened into a bowlike little O of apparent shock. There were a few sharp intakes of breath at this new development, and a couple triumphant chuckles, one of which belonged to the cowboy himself, who now wore an expression of sly superiority. Finally, someone had beaten this painted out-of-town girl with the look clothes and the don’t-touch entourage.
Veronique’s huge-eyed gape lasted about two seconds, and then she flipped and fanned her own cards, hiding her mouth and revealing a straight flush. Hearts. Of course. When she again revealed her parted lips they’d drawn into a grin of mischief.
“Seems I got lucky again, boys!”
The cowboy’s fist hit the table with enough force to seemingly fling him up out of his chair: he was fully standing when the thump shut everyone up. For about two seconds he looked to be contemplating violence, at which point he met the flat gaze of Veronique’s leftmost cousin, Lash, and reconsidered, polling the other heavy, to her right, Renfro, who appeared to concur with his associate.
The cowboy left. Shortly thereafter most of the men who’d been buzzing around the little card table did likewise. It was impossible to get anywhere with Veronique in any sense of the expression and the endeavor itself had exhausted its entertainment value.
“Oh where you off to, fellas?” Veronique laughed, raking coins and crumpled bills to her bosom in a histrionic show of sheer, avaricious victory. “Play another hand! I’m sure you’ll get the hang of it eventu -”
She broke off as a hand, gloved in soft black kid leather, closed over the wooden seatback of the abandoned chair opposite her. Her eyes scaled a wall of impeccable white suit.
Diamonds’ rider had a rifle that had once been a pretty straightforward lever action with a tubular magazine and a cattle brandish monogram scratched into its buttplate—the same glyph-like brand Diamonds wore on his rear right hindquarter. The woman had retrofitted the rifle, though: eviscerated its nickel receiver and stuffed it full of slick brass clockwork to automate its action with the clever precision of of a watchmaker, an alteration she’d followed up by gouging away the monogram with the scribbling abandon of a furious child. The latter was the only modification visible with the gun stowed in the holster slung under her right stirrup; still, even a straightforward-looking rifle with some scratched-out engraving probably fell within the scope of the sign Diamonds passed as he carried her into Lookback:
THE CARRYING AND DISCHARGING OF FIREARMS
IS STRICTLY PROHIBITED WITHIN CITY LIMITS
The woman didn’t so much as glance sidelong at the sign, unconcerned despite the rifle, two unusual pistols with the same kind of tubular magazines and modified action holstered at her hips, and some assortment of cans or canisters clipped to a concealed shoulder rig—you could hear them clank and jingle with Diamonds’ every step despite their concealment underneath that itchy gray heap of a cloak.
There weren’t too many folk wandering Lookback’s thoroughfare to question her outright flouting of their local ordinances, though: an aproned shopkeep she passed was preoccupied dogging the last malingering clouds of dust from his tract of boardwalk with a straw broom; a bespectacled financier-type fumbled impotently with a misbehaving lock beyond his apparent expertise on the front door of a land office. For all the notice they took of her, she took even less of them, her dead-eyed gaze fixed on the saloon up the street (for it had resolved itself as a definite saloon; she could hear the manic plink of a cheap piano played poorly). She thought she could make out a familiar, blaze red bay tethered out front.
“Veronique Dauterive.” It really wasn’t a question, either: it was the declaration of someone surprised to find an acquaintance somewhere unforeseen. Except the man standing across from her wasn’t surprised. His hat had been politely banished to his opposite hand, and he didn’t look about to sit down uninvited, but he wasn’t surprised: the corners of his grin were curled too slyly.
“Have we met?” Veronique’s tone was civil, even chipper, but her arms were still thrown around her takings, somewhat defensively. Another shadow of her less moneyed youth: she had the look of a scrappy runt ready to fight off the big dogs to hang onto what was hers. “You do look familiar, sir.”
“No, Ma’am. I don’t believe we have.” His pale blue eyes had the look of someone laughing inwardly at a private joke, holding onto their amusement because an explanation would be impolite … or just tedious.
He took his hand off the seatback of the chair, unfurled it in a showy indication of the seat. “May I?”
Veronique’s red-stained lips drew themselves into the flirtatious little bow of earlier. She looked comically predatory: a brassy runt to her core. She relaxed her defense of her hoard to reach into a beaded red clutchpurse lying beside her on the table and fish out a cigarette holder, gorgeously drawn red glass. Behind her, Renfro helpfully produced some tobacco and set to rolling a quirley for her. “So long as you aim to play.”
The man didn’t act immediately on her invitation. “I aim to play ‘s long as the stakes’re agreeable.” His eyes flicked down toward her bolstered bosom and that huge red rock. These weren’t ocean- or sapphire-blue eyes or any of that balderdash: they were the stark, blown-out blue of a cloudless, killing hot summer noon. “I ain’t interested in money.” With this vague stipulation aired he pulled the chair out, sat his hat on the table, and folded his big frame into the little saloon chair.
“Oh?” said Veronique, clearly and coyly intrigued. She had the cigarette holder gripped in her bared teeth, fitted with Renfro’s proffered cigarette. She was still struggling with striking a match from her bag when the man in the white suit leaned across the table and lit the cigarette for her, seemingly with his fingertips. She didn’t have long to wonder at this, though, because while he had his arm extended over her way he went on to take the liberty of reaching for her pendant. The backs of his long gloved fingers couldn’t help but brush her naked chest as he boldly scooped up the stone in his hand to examine. Lash and Renfro reacted before Veronique did: the pair seemed to uncoil from behind her, their shared mass looming like thunderclouds.
Neither Veronique nor the man in the white suit reacted: the man’s eyes shifted from the stone to Veronique. “This little trinket was your Aunt Boudreaux’s, wasn’t it? Like most of the money you lost along your way out here.”
Veronique stared back, unflinching, similarly unconcerned with her ominously crowding cousins or the man’s hand, still resting there, scandalously, thin black kid leather all that separated them. “You certainly make up in nerve what you lack in manners. What’s your name, stranger? You have me at a disadvantage and I’m dangerous cornered.”
Diamonds longingly swung his head toward a nearby water trough out in front of Lookback’s little freight office. The woman let him meander off to drink, redirecting her to the signboard near the freight office door. It was covered in a flaking dermis of layered paper corners, the remnants of a hundred notices and wanted postings carefully tacked up and hastily torn down. Pinned among an outermost stratum of fresher wanted sheets was one that hadn’t been forced to make due with a spare line drawing of the individual in question like the rest; this one featured a reprint of a genuine, professionally-made photograph. She knew it well; she knew the face grinning smartly at the camera from beneath the brim of a black tophat even better.
WANTED:
JOHN HENRY HUNTER
Arson, Destruction of Property, Murder, Suspicion of Witchcraft
$10,000
will be paid by this department for the apprehension or termination of this man.
Hunter stands Six Foot 4 inches high. Muscled but graceful of gait ; approximately 200 pounds.
Blue eyes ; dark hair, graying. Appears to be approx. 40 years of age. Wears a neat-cropped beard ; clothing of fine quality. Immediate use of deadly force recommended even if the suspect appears unarmed.
He looked like the gent in the photo, sure enough, but older, smile chiseled sharper with age. The description accounted for the extra years, though: dark hair, graying. Tip to toe, this was unmistakably ten grand murderer John Henry Hunter, though Lash and Renfro had decided independently that “muscled” should probably have read “built like a steel-driver”; Hunter’s clothing of fine quality -- a white felt gambler’s hat and a matching frock coat over a brassy satin vest—would have looked absurd on him had they not been so unimpeachably tailored.
Veronique had never been much for paying attention to her surroundings and had apparently managed to avoid seeing any of Hunter’s ubiquitous wanted posters. She certainly wasn’t reacting with the concern Lash and Renfro would have liked.
Lash decided he would be remiss in not making her aware of the obvious, and leaned his huge, mastiff’s head close to breathe a warning in her ear.
Her response was not one of redoubled caution as her cousin had allowed himself to hope.
“Oh?” she said. It was a gulp of a noise, like an overexcited lapdog snapping up a dropped tidbit, and she didn’t ease off staring at Hunter. She was leering at him, really; more than repaying any wandering his summer eyes might’ve done with her own clear, hungry intrigue. “Tell me. How is it, then, that the territories’ most villainous outlaw has made the apparent acquaintance of my murdered aunt?”
Hunter—for of course he was John Henry Hunter –tucked the pendant back in to rest amongst all that young, mounded flesh and retracted his hand. Relaxing back into his chair his smile returned, spreading jaggedly across his face. “Peculiar business, what happened with your Aunt Boudreaux.” He glanced down at the bottle of bourbon kept cozily beside Veronique’s purse, requisitioning a drink with an authoritative twitch of his eyebrows. To Lash and Renfro’s silent outrage she responded instantly and wordlessly, pouring him a shot—in her own glass!—and sliding it over. “Peculiar and unfortunate,” Hunter drawled on, speculatively, raising the glass. “But I do hope you’re not insinuatin’ somethin’, ma’am.”
“Au contraire, sir.” Veronique said. She savored a long drag off her cigarette; made a show of it, really, most certainly aping something she’d seen Red Fork sophisticates do. Smoke curled from her parted, painted lips. “Just curious. But of course my aunt always did keep peculiar company. Peculiar and unfortunate.”
One man did take an interest in Diamonds and his rider’s jangling arsenal as the horse ambled along the thoroughfare.
Leaning in the shadows of the boardwalk, silently and pensively gnawing a mouthful of tobacco, Lookback’s sheriff figured her for a bounty hunter the instant she rode into view. After all, $10,000 John Henry Hunter was lounging in the saloon.
Oh, sure he knew the outlaw was here, but unlike this driven little hardcase Hunter had been possessed of the decency to conceal any weaponry he might have been carrying. And the sheriff could read -- deadly force recommended even if the suspect appears unarmed. A shot at the ten grand wasn’t worth a shot at a pine box, so long as Hunter didn’t stir up any trouble in Lookback. The rest of that stuff he’d allegedly done before he’d ridden into town? Hearsay. Someone else’s problem.
He’d have taken this apparent bounty hunter for a dilettante, if not for all that hardware and the way she was sitting that big gray horse, deep and relaxed in the way only the truly unafraid can. She was gonna stir up the trouble, God damn it, forcing his involvement.
Bounty hunter shitheels.
The sheriff spat, hand slipping to the grip of his revolver, just to make sure it was handy.
“But to the business at hand….” Veronique segued, sliding her deck of fancily-printed playing cards into the open center of the table.
“Yes, Ma’am,” Hunter agreed, and slipped the cards out from under her gloved hand before she could commence shuffling herself. “If you can call such a pleasure business.”
Veronique was a fair hand at shuffling cards, and had aimed to impress, but she found herself quickly glad of his preemptive strike: the outlaw shuffled with a magician’s legerdemain. It was entertainment just watching the deck twist and sigh twixt those deft fingers, but more importantly she’d have embarrassed herself had she dealt—embarrassed herself and never known. The very thought reddened her cheeks, but you could hardly tell under all the rouge, thank God. “What did you have in mind for stakes, sir, if not money?”
His summer eyes strayed unashamedly back to her bosom—or was it the pendant, again? They were narrowed with raw avarice, either way, and Veronique, fascinated with this infamous rogue who may or may not have liberated her from her penniless exile to the southern swamps along with her eccentric aunt’s money, hoped the former. She wasn’t about to let him know that, though, and raised a hand demurely to her throat, putting her deepening blush to work on a look of scandalized innocence.
Hunter grinned. “Your aunt was a good friend of mine, Miss Dauterive. I’d very much like a little somethin’ to remember her by.”
Veronique’s fingers slid down her neck to close around the coal red stone. “My pendant?” she said, sulkily. “And what do you aim to wager against it, sir?”
“Well now, to keep money out of this altogether and thereby keep things interestin’, how about if you win…” Hunter leaned forward on his elbows, setting the reshuffled cards aside in a neat stack, evergreen grin uncomfortably knowing. “…I’ll satisfy your curiosity and accompany you upstairs.”
The briefest stillness crawled by as Veronique and her cousins sopped up Hunter’s audacity, her blush bleeding out to her eartips, and then, even as Lash and Renfro manifested knives in their hands via their own brand of legerdemain, it was Dauterive who moved first.
“How dare you!” she screeched, with animal hurt. She’d stood up so fast her skirts half overturned the table, and she’d swung with the flat of her hand for Hunter’s insolent grin, but he’d grabbed her wrist, stopping her. Her breath caught in her throat like a fishbone even as he stared back patiently, evenly; pointedly oblivious to her cousins’ encroaching knives and self-satisfied with his own accuracy.
Arson, Destruction of Property, Murder, Suspicion of Witchcraft. Peculiar and unfortunate. Better late than never, stark fear began to close around Veronique’s throat, tight and implacable as iron banding—as Hunter’s long, graceful fingers, still sunk into the red satin of her gloves.
“Oh, c’mon, darlin’,” Hunter drawled conversationally. He let go of her wrist to better employ his deft fingers rescuing the bourbon from the floor, where it had fallen when Veronique had upset the table. Free of his grip she was nevertheless still held there, standing stupidly, by his bleach-blue eyes. “Is the maint’nance o’ your faux virtue whilst you gamble away a dead woman’s earnings in a low down drinking establishment strictly necessary?” Sitting up with his recovered bourbon he found Lash and Renfro’s knives in noticeably closer proximity. “I understand this is the frontier, Mizz Dauterive, and I appreciate it’d made a fair better story if the dangerous rogue with the dash and the dab dealin’ hand won your honor at cards but it just don’t hardly seem fair, does it…?” He raised the bourbon as if in salute, meaning to take a swig straight from the bottle, and then he actually winked. “ Bettin’ somethin’ you’re lookin’ to give away, anyhow?”
“Tuat t'en grosse bueche, couillon,” Lash rasped, closing the rest of the distance around the table to press his knife to Hunter’s neck like he had a mind to give him a good shave.
Renfro joined him a little more leisurely, furiously clucking his tongue and touching the tip of Hunter’s nose with his own knife. “Wherever did a dandy like you learn to talk that way to a lady?”
Lash managed to press his knife even closer for emphasis -- cradling Hunter’s adam’s apple with the blade, really. “Any lady, let alone our petit cousine.”
“Well now.” Hunter didn’t just appear unintimidated: he put on a look of deliberate patience like a schoolteacher leading a flummoxed passel of kids through a tricky string of sums. “Seems the two of you weren’t anymore careful readin’ that wanted poster than your petit cousine here, after all.” The outlaw tossed back a mouthful of bourbon, but he didn’t swallow. He regurgitated the liquor full in Lash’s face … only now it was on fire.
Startled, Renfro hesitated, and Hunter rounded on him like a dragon, drenching the place in flames.
It was most certainly Hunter’s bay, Hearts. Diamonds whickered a quiet, reflexive greeting before the brand—the same sharp, sigilish brand—resolved itself on the red horse’s right hindquarter. Smoke and screaming burst from the saloon’s batwing doors as the woman rode up, a final confirmation as she jerked the rifle free of its holster.
The sheriff appeared down the street, jogging over with his gun in hand, resignedly yelling a cease and desist, but the woman wouldn’t have heard him as she slid from Diamonds’ saddle even if not for the racket, so intent was she on scanning and dismissing each of the handful of cowboys who fled the saloon in a hailstorm of discombobulated obscenity.
Inside, the saloon had pretty well cleared out apart from the trio of cousins and was rapidly being bedecked in curtains of fire as Lash and Renfro thrashed and howled, setting furnishings drenched in the capsized drinks of fleeing patrons ablaze. The howling was tapering off, too, as fire seared the lungs and throats of Veronique’s dying cousins.
She herself was unharmed, physically, backing unsteadily away from Hunter and, by extension, the safety of the exit. Transfixed by his sinister calm as he collected his hat and stuffed it on his head, she dared not break past, and eventually found her bustle crumpled against the chair rail with nowhere further to retreat.
Smiling patiently all the while, Hunter followed, closing to such an intimate distance Veronique could feel his breath on her vulnerable neck and in the surreality of the moment thought he meant to kiss her rather than wondering how she could possibly notice the heat of his exhalation in the dangerous furnace the saloon had become.
“Get out. Get out or I’ll shoot, so help me you son of a bitch.”
Hunter looked up—Veronique didn’t; she was still staring at him and shoving herself ever tighter against the wall behind her. It was the voice of the manager, standing above in the second floor hallway with a double-barreled shotgun resting on the railing, pivoted down at Hunter.
Hunter’s eyes narrowed almost imperceptibly as he looked back at Veronique, almost conspiratorially. He clucked his tongue, as if he was looking for her agreement. “Friendly game of cards ends in knifeplay before the stakes are even agreed upon and here I’m unarmed since supposedly this pisshole has a no firearms ordinance and now would you look here? Proprietor himself’s waiting for me not with the sheets turned down but with both barrels of a big ol’ eight gauge. This is a real hard place for a law-abiding citizen, seems like.” He raised his voice, then, to address the innkeeper, but his eyes didn’t leave Veronique’s and his hand strayed again to her pendant.
He took the stone in his fingers and pulled; the chain and filigree and lesser stones that had made up its setting scattered as it broke. A garnet bead settled into the valley of her breasts and Hunter fastidiously plucked it out and flicked it aside as he pocketed the big red stone itself. “Not exactly what you bargained for, I’d wager,” he told Veronique. “But you wanted excitement, didn’t you, Mizz Dauterive? Seems to me the frontier’s made good so far.”
Per the dictates of etiquette he tipped his hat and began reflexively to back away to avoid turning his back on her, but a few steps later Lash’s unrecognizably burnt husk finally fell directly in his path and Hunter turned, then, to better negotiate stepping over the writhing figure.
With a parting glance up at the leering eight-gauge he made a show of slamming a half dollar on a burning table to cover the cost of the bourbon, and then pushed his way out the saloon doors.
He might have looked over his shoulder when Veronique finally gathered herself well enough to start screaming, but he found himself otherwise occupied the moment he stepped outside.
The red-haired woman stood there, clockwork rifle leveled up at him from the bottom of the saloon’s short three steps, and then the screaming, and the saloon, and the sheriff running up the street and the gawkers and all of Lookback were gone,
and it was just her, outside the theatre, looking up at him with badly-hidden surprise at having been hailed, embedded deep in a crush of sycophants and yet all he saw, alone. Her hair was brushed copper, then, and her eyes weren’t orange but blue, blue as a swimming hole on a killing hot summer day, and he knew that embarrassed half smile and every fold that formed it and he knew how angry it could look, cold and righteous --
But that wasn’t who he was looking at now: staring down the rifle barrel was a look of mechanical malice: hateful orange eyes firebox coals in a face as otherwise impassive as iron.
Diamonds whickered at him, or possibly at the sheriff, who’d dug his heels into a dusty halt a scant five yards away with the barrel of his pistol floating indecisively between the outlaw and the woman. “Goddamn you I said stop!”
They ignored him, though. The millisecond that had widened Hunter’s eyes in a flash of surprised recognition was gone and he was tipping his hat, cruelly oblivious smile returned, and the woman’s finger was coiling around the rifle trigger like a constrictor.
“John Henry Hunter,” she said, in a voice dry and oddly hollow, like an empty boiler tank, and fired.
The report from the rifle was overloud, its amplitude bolstered by a simultaneous crack from the sheriff’s gun. His bullet thudded into the woman’s left forearm, which had been steadying the long rifle barrel in front of her, disturbing her aim enough that her own shot grazed the graying fringe of Hunter’s close-cropped beard and then buried itself harmlessly in the saloon’s clapboards.
“I’m just about sick to death of you bounty hunter shitheels thinking you’re above regard for the law!” the sheriff hollered, voice cracking with intensity in his desperation to be heeded.
With the sound of a key turning crisply in a new lock the woman’s rifle ejected a brass casing and chambered another bullet as she squared her aim. There was a conspicuous lack of blood involved, though, and she seemed hardly to notice the wound as she tracked Hunter’s casual descent from the saloon door. He appeared to share her concern with the sheriff—which is to say he had none—reaching into his jacket for a cigar as he made casually for his bay. His eyes stayed fastened to the woman, the slight, guarded smile hardened on his mouth.
The sheriff decided to switch tactics, jerking his pistol over at Hunter, instead. “And just where you think you’re going, Hunter?”
Hunter’s eyes curled into amused little slits as he rooted the cigar in his teeth. With a twist of his fingers he lit it as he had Dauterive’s; meanwhile he reached out toward the sheriff with the outspread fingers of his opposite hand. Spontaneously, the cartridges in the firearm pointed at him discharged, all at once, peeling the top strap off the gun and ripping apart the cylinder along with most of the lawman’s hand. Keening curses, the sheriff dropped what little remained of the pistol.
Veronique emerged from the smoke of the saloon just as Hunter was swinging aboard his bay. She was arm-in-arm with the owner and both were coughing and retching through handkerchiefs.
“Fire, sheriff!” croaked the innkeeper, too smoke-blind and consumed with worry over his establishment to notice the lawman was letting out a continuous snarl of pain as he beheld his flayed, shrapnel-riddled hand.
The red-haired woman took a shot at Hunter as he spun the bay and thundered off with his heels in the horse’s flanks. Missing, she threw open her serape and dove beneath its rough gray folds with a free hand, affording anyone who might’ve been looking a glimpse at a veritable garland of brass canisters: ammunition for a peculiar weapon she now retrieved: a mad, short-barreled grenade launcher. Unceremoniously dropping the rifle she ripped free one of the brass charges and fitted it to the gun, managing to load and level it at Hunter just as he hurtled out of town. She pulled the trigger.
Hunter glanced under his arm to see the projectile arcing neatly toward him. He muttered something in a dark language and threw his free hand out behind him; from it he flung a fireball backward to intercept the canister, detonating it midair and consuming half a building and the roughly-scratched “Welcome to Lookback” sign that had graced this approach.
With a hiss like the last water scorching off the bottom of a kettle, the woman stowed the grenade launcher and made for Diamonds, her last stride a leap that put her leading foot in the near stirrup. The grey stallion had flattened into a gallop before her other leg had so much as settled over his back.
Recognizing a closing window of opportunity for some recompense, the sheriff, clutching his burnt and bleeding right hand in his left armpit, clumsily drew and cocked his left pistol.
“Goddamnit,” he said, pulling the trigger.
The bullet caught up to Diamonds at the edge of town, as he danced through the debris of the sign and the house. It grazed his hindquarters, and the horse chuffed in apparent irritation without slowing or deviating from his pursuit of Hearts.
Vane glanced back at the red brushstroke the bullet had painted across the horse’s driving muscle, even as she leveled the barrel of the rifle across her left forearm to fire after Hunter. And then she spoke:
“ ‘Diamonds,’ I thought, for your looks, and to fit with the rest of his…collection. But you’re tougher than steel, sure enough.”
Diamonds’ eyes rolled in his head at the sound of her voice, more startling than the bullet grazing his flesh. Bleeding, he barreled up the valley grade after Hunter and Hearts, Lookback a dwindling column of smoke and dust behind him.
Ahead, Hearts surged on with champion speed, but Diamonds was slowly closing the gap. With another glance behind him, Hunter took the cigar from his teeth and chucked it backwards. The butt landed in Diamonds’ path, a scant few lengths ahead of him, The grey ignored the little thing, until, ahead, Hunter thrust his right arm into the air, and the cigar’s pinprick flame exploded skyward in response, an instant, towering flame twisting fifty feet up into the twilight.
Most horses would have erupted into a panic, potentially lost their feet in their desperation to get away from the unnatural blaze. Diamonds cut around it like a barrel racer, unhurt and unaffected but for the fire singing the tips of his swinging mane. He snorted at the scent of burnt hair, and continued to gain on Hearts and Hunter.
Ahead, a bare cottonwood spread dead and lonely at the top of the rise. Flattening against Hearts’ neck Hunter avoided a shot at his head from Vane’s rifle. He freed his lariat from his saddle strings and lengthened its noose enough to throw, turning Hearts with his knees in an attempt to evade another shot, which he did, but a third caught the bay right in the neck as his body broadened in the woman’s sights. In the instant before the horse folded Hunter threw his rope, desperate but level, at an overhanging branch of the oncoming cottonwood. As the lariat wrapped once, neatly, around the tree branch Hunter tumbled free of the somersaulting bay. Hearts crumpled, thrashing. Blossoms of flung gore freckled the yellow prairie grass red and settling dust turned it blightish black almost as fast as Diamonds pounded past. The grey horse narrowly skirted the dead but inertia drove he and his rider past Hunter and under the overhang of the cottonwood, where the perfectly looped lariat settled around the red-haired woman’s neck.
With the lariat looped around the branch Hunter hardly felt the tug of such a mean frame getting jerked from the back of her horse by the impromptu gallows. She swung, limp and grotesque, hat knocked from her snarl of red hair, and Hunter’s mouth went as tight as the lariat’s noose.
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I think I'll just print this out and add to the book. Thank you!
