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The Captain's Heart CH 80

🕑 Added 2025-03-08 14:00:02 +0000 UTC

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Kindar

I don't know how it happened, since the scene break is in the 'master file' and I usual do a direct copy/paste, but you are correct, it was somehow missing. I've corrected that

Angsthase

The transition > He wouldn’t hold what Thuruk was doing against him. It was his friend’s personal life, not Jeremy’s. But he was going to make sure he knew he didn’t care for anymore teasing past this point. > > Jeremy went slack on top of Gralgiran. Is jarring, but you probably just missed a section-dividing asterisk. > “Thank you,” he whispered in the mane. “You have no idea how much I needed this after the shift I’ve had.” Honestly, he's lucky the Engineer didn't message Gralgiran to complain — especially since his need was apparently affecting the whole section, rather than being a private torment.

Marcwolf

I think it was a good chapter to again stress the difference between Jeremy's morals and a happy healthy Kelsirian. Atleast Jeremy can be near people having sex. And yes - Toom has a problem of not being Grals lover anymore.


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