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Stepping Wild, Draft 2, CH 43

🕑 Added 2025-04-21 13:00:10 +0000 UTC

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Kindar

thank you. I have corrected them. and yes. the 'he' was meant to imply tibs. it's been corrected too

Jim Smith

Duplicate "After a dozen turns, Tibs decided they were far enough. While he hardly felt the earth he’d encased himself in, anyone else doing that" "He waited for the woman" [subject (whether Charlie or Tibs, is unclear . Charlie speak, Tibs perform an action, and then the money is left by an indeterminate "he," presumably Tibs] "go kiss hi[s] ass."


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