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Stepping Wild, Draft 2, CH 98

🕑 Added 2025-08-27 13:00:08 +0000 UTC

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Kindar

I am unsure what you mean by the phrase is incomplete do you mean there isn't enough context to imply the dungeon means they aren't letting Tibs steal more of its essence?

Jim Smith

gabs[gaps] among the “ “If you think I’m letting you just steal from me.” [The prior sentence fragment is an incomplete thought. Either add in ellipsis, or a dash, or complete the sentence. Ellipsis if the dungeon is trailing off and not completing the sentence, or a dash of it is interrupted by Tibs]


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