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Mind Your Step, Draft 1, CH 15

🕑 Added 2025-10-06 13:00:03 +0000 UTC

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Kindar

thank you for pointing this out. I corrected it with "caused her to search the trees in that direction." to avoid repeating the word 'sentry'

Jim Smith

Tibs had decided not to tell Heather about the sentry, since it wouldn’t change what was coming, but she’d noticed something that caused her to search the trees in the direction they’d[ the sentry had] run.


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