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Chapter One-Hundred Forty-Seven

🕑 Added 2023-04-21 02:04:05 +0000 UTC

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Ethan Barrow

The more I read Honey talk of Thedium as "The Emperor" the more I start to change her from librarian voice to one of the space marines from Warhammer 40k. This makes me laugh, imagining Honey in power armor is also funny.

SciGuy75

Great chapter! I am impressed by your consistent use of Honey's dances rather than words, hard to write such meaningful interactions without spoken words

Blue Trooper

Will we hear more of movable dungeons? Will violet move out that way to help secure the oath on her own as well as provide her with a similar start as our friendly DM? Will the DM turn the outposts into a highway to the South wood? Helping adventures go there to learn even harder stuff and get experience with some friendly ish deadly stuff? Helping the south wood out even further? Vitalizing it?

Altaan

good chapter, just a little typo. Or at least as far as they’ve been able to test. For the denizens, though… they’re more or less on their one(own) once they step outside of the Emperor’s borders.

Chrystal 1776

Agreed more ace representation us always welcome IMHO I think I can count on one hand the times I've seen it in other stories 🤔

Munirah Hutchinson

Not all relationships need to be physical. They seem to have a good bond and great potential as a team. Intimacy of the emotional kind is underrepresented in fiction.

Herakilla

Thanks for the chapter! It's nice to see more of Honey's effervescence with how she approaches everything!

jkbscopes

How would that even work concidering the massive size difference? They work well together but shipping them is a little weird imo

Raufgar

Thanks for the chapter~! Thediem should start plans to build a road from Fourdock towards the Southwood once the concrete formula's ratio has been figured out. Not for the road proper, but it definitely needs drainage and foundations. Although I think he should at least expand once into the woods to give himself a proper foothold for future construction projects, such as access to the planned hold/fortress. Is the planned shelter on or near the path to Southwood I wonder...

Cameron Vigil

i totally ship honey and leo, and I have no doubt that it's intentional on your end.

Khenal

I was wondering if I had missed that... Should be fixed now, thanks

Aqazix

Maybe some aquatic treasure hunt as well.

blaze87b

The sign of a great commander is knowing who is best at what and deploying them appropriately. It seems the scions have realized this and instead of blind loyalty, they've chosen to follow and embrace Thediem's guidance. On that note, I really wish this was more than 2 or 3 times a week, I'm so invested in this lol. Outstanding work, bud. On an unrelated note, have you thought about introducing enchanted boat racing to Hullbreak? Saw a comment on reddit about it and I thought it'd be a really cool idea for the Captain, similar to Thediem's obstacle course

Kindred

Khenal, the last chapter isn't listed as a chapter


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