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Chapter Two-Hundred Sixteen

🕑 Added 2023-12-22 04:03:20 +0000 UTC

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mly85lc

Oh my a is it a beginning [artist] or [earth builder] title?

jeffh4

Another fun chapter. Two comments It’s a powerful one, so it’s easy to be intimidated by. Not a complete sentence. Either delete “by” or add “it”. Also, this sounds odd.  I also wanted to talk with Nova, if you don’t mind?” Unless you are talking with a small child, you'd say “I also wanted to talk with you.” Because she doesn't use baby-talk anywhere else when addressing Nova, this sentence sounds odd.

Ethan Barrow

TFTC!

Tsume Eiranis

'Aelara and Ragnar both nod at that.  Aelara still doesn’t quite understand...' First 'Aelara' should be 'Yvonne'. Great chapter, nice bit of background without an obvious infodump to bog one down.

Raufgar

Thank you for the chapter~!

LinaBoeckwurm

Does the name Aelara mean something that I don't remember? No it's probably her last name it's referring to, which I don't think we've been told yet... Or I could be completely blanking on it XD Either way, lovely chapter! When reaching the end I felt very cozy!

Herakilla

Thanks for the chapter. Hopefully Nova takes away something positive from the kind words!

Demonlord

Thanks for the amazing chapter 😊

Speedsaber

Maybe a doctor would seek her out for obsidian tools, though with magic and potions I dont know how much medical knowledge is out there

Kedar

I wonder if they would contextually understand her name being a power to "Be the death of a god" as I assume like most societies they prolly have a sun God and a nova is the death of a sun.

Kedar

This makes me feel like Nova is going to try to be a pure artist/crafter and make things like pottery and sculptures.if she does She would be I think the first scion to pursue a "job" that wouldn't directly benefit Thedium or that Thedium has directly hinted he wanted someone to try it. Also would be cool if she unlocked a unique unsharable room called a "stellar workshop" that just gives artistic bonuses.

Speedsaber

I wonder if anyone would have the concept of what a Nova really is in this world. Something so powerful it would shatter the very immovable planet they walk upon. I do hope she finds her place, as many have stated living up to an event that obliterates solar systems is hard to do when you were born maybe a few months ago, even a nova takes billions of years of buildup to occur. Anyways thanks for another chapter, and I hope you enjoy the holidays.

George

Thanks for the chapter!


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