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Chapter Two-Hundred Thirty-Eight

🕑 Added 2024-03-12 03:11:33 +0000 UTC

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Stickboy172

And the Love God gained two more followers that day

jeffh4

When you have no perspective to see things differently, any kind of treatment seems to be normal.

Altaan

Indeed!

Anthony Felscher

So very true. And the anger will be righteous.

Raufgar

Wololo...

Ethan Barrow

This was a lovely chapter. TFTC, it's great to see Vernew doing her thing and socializing.

LinaBoeckwurm

Definitely am enjoying Lechulla's perspective on things, very much loving her view point! Wonder how Merrik's would be different, wondering if he would notice different things...

Tsume Eiranis

thanks for the chapter!

Demonlord

Thanks for the nice chapter 😊 I really enjoy it when they explain how differently Thediem everything does and it's working good that way

Kebbitevoke -

It's gonna be a bit heartbreaking when these two prisoners realise how cruelly their people are treated.

Herakilla

Thanks for the chapter! Definitely want to see more of them reacting to Thedeim being explained!

Eriach

Vernew smirks at the two sunburned subterranean people.  “From your looks, I take it the Maw doesn’t play well with others?” ...you could use instead..."From your looks," as Vernew glances between the two cave dwellers, "I take it the Maw doesn't play well with others."

Eriach

They set the boxes aside after finishing.  There’s plenty of time to return them. ""You can use a comma (, as) after "finishing" to join the two sentences as they carry the same thought instead of making two short statements. """They set the boxes aside after finishing, as there’s plenty of time to return them."""

blaze87b

There seems to be something wrong with this chapter, it's far too short

Eriach

Do you think the surface folk could win just by retreating and letting the run cook the Maw’s forces? ""letting the sun cook the Maw's forces?""

Eriach

The pale elf nods as he sits beside her, taking a moment to enjoy the cool cave all as well. ""cave wall as well""


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