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Chapter Two-Hundred Thirty-Nine

🕑 Added 2024-03-15 02:56:26 +0000 UTC

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Tsurani

Interesting chapter, and laying out future challenges. Looking forward to Thedeim and team taking the fight to the Maw. FYI, two spaces after periods is generally discouraged by every major style guide in both academic and business writing, as well as for published works and their manuscripts. I'm assuming you still write like this because you're an American over 40, as it used to be a bit more common?

jeffh4

Excellent chapter highlighting both strategy and Theodim fighting self-doubt. Some corrections: in the rangers "rangers" should be capitalized a mental affinity as strong as the harbinger. Should be capitalized and possessive a mental affinity as strong as the Harbinger's. tunnels to the maw again tunnels to the Maw   x 5 Not formatted correctly. Reader shouldn't be seeing html code.

Ethan Barrow

TFTC, the tension is getting so good for the fight to come! I'm looking forward to some really evil people getting a well deserved beat down.

Vik M.

If this is Nova as a Magikarp I'm almost scared to see the Gyarados.

Raufgar

Thanks for the chapter~! With all the fighting that will be happening, will we get to see a level-up of a Scion? Or better yet, an Evolution? Imagine Nova, getting beaten down, do a Magikarp -> Gyarados?!?


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