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Chapter Two-Hundred Seventy

🕑 Added 2024-07-04 23:38:08 +0000 UTC

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Jerry A

Or Southwood can do it? Mentor it I mean.

Robinn57

Does that mean he's going to graduate violet to companion? Since I think he can only mentor one dungeon at a time

Aaron Mcmaster

What about an Escher maze?

Herakilla

Thanks for the chapter! That's cool to see the creation of a new dungeon

Blue Trooper

TFTC

Salthin

No, i think we're getting baited with gravity. Gravity is not technically capital F fundamental, spacetime is. I know how the affinity system works, I'm not an idiot. Time will tell if Teemo gets gravity, time, or spacetime affinity...

Lord-Siver

I doubt theDM will want to have another student under him but maybe the Southwood might have found a mentee now.

Lord-Siver

not time but gravity. even though there is only a small step from gravity to time it's not the same. It's like with Kinetic and sound. both are linked extremely closely but not the same as they have a few differences.

Salthin

Space... plus... time. Hell yeah. That's one hell of a affinity path for our favorite rodent!

Eriach

Dune Sand wyrm incoming...

Vik M.

What if it goes the route of being a milkable worm? It's a local delicacy after all

87894354

Looks like Tarl is going to have even more paperwork on his hands. There was a time when his job consisted of watching Hullbreak and confirming that the murderous Nevermore was contained. Now... this. Good thing that Berdol is around to help.

MattUDFells

With the reveal of the baby dungeon, I almost forgot about the possibility of gravity affinity. If Teemo can make things float and create shortcuts through space, then a floating island in and upwards expansion wouldn't be outside the realm of possibility

The-Guy-Who-Asks

I believe a worm hivemind would be called a Worm that Walks. https://pathfinderwiki.com/wiki/Worm_that_walks Alternatively if it goes the big guardian route it might be a Wormonger. https://dragon-quest.org/wiki/Wormonger

MattUDFells

What if the worm becomes a colony of worms with a hivemind, like the Hunters from Halo? That could be interesting

MattUDFells

I think having access to too much mana may be overwhelming for such a young dungeon. Maybe a college fund like fir Violet. Speaking of which, having Southwood become a mentor to this new dungeon may be a good idea

Typhoonator

Baby!

Ender419

Awesome chapter from start to finish! Hopefully Teemo & Co. are able to coax the new dungeon into aligning with Thedeim from which the dungeon collective share a good portion of the mana received with it. Thedeim may have lost capturing the Maw’s core but instead gained a new ally from it.

Monday

that newborn is in good hands! I was wondering how it would’ve made scions so quickly but if that room is its domain then that would mean Tarl, Berdol, and Best Birb qualify as Delvers which would’ve given it instant chunks of mana (despite them only fighting off the invaders) Got some pretty cool scions to start off with too. That Lil worm is gonna get B I G

David Rusk

Teemo gains gravity, then makes a gravity-well jail that only he can access, gains time affinity as space and time are linked. Timelord rat!

Markell

Teemo the time-lord, master of space-time. Would surprise me if he masters making a box that’s bigger on the inside.

Gregs_Crow

hope the town doesn’t treat the new dungeon in a bad way and vise versa.

Gregs_Crow

southwood: back in my time (insert i’m better than you without telling i’m better than you here)

MattUDFells

The dungeoneers guild may have done this before by posting inspectors at possible dungeon spawn locations

Gregs_Crow

bro, if you had added this “!?!?” i would have lost it.

Markell

Holy smokes I did not even realise that. Good catch!

Markell

I love how even without a second of hesitation everyone sees the new dungeon and just goes: “it is small and precious and must be defended at all costs”. Also: happy Teemo is getting the validation he deserves. He works hard so it’s nice to see he’s actually feeling proud of his skills

Logos

Since becoming a patreon, I've been reading the backlog of peeks. One's an interview where you mention that one of the 'problems' of writing a story about a dungeon is that a dungeon can't move (though of course there's another peek about a moving dungeon, but nevermind that). But creating new dungeons in its vicinity like this is sort of like moving, and kind of resolves that issue. It'll be fun to see this new little dungeon enter the dungeon coalition. That's also why I like the chapters about violet. It's all very stardew valley.

LinaBoeckwurm

Interesting as always! *Wants the next chapter now but knows she needs to be patient*

Ethan Barrow

It's so cool that it took on Tarl's affinity due to him being the main agitator. TFTC!

Marla Parraguirre

BABY DUNGEON!! Om Gosh! Can't want to see what happens next! Tyftc

architectural engineer

Thank you for the chapter!

BrokenLord321

Seeing what Teemo is going for affinity wise I'm otherwise terrified of a potential Radahn Rat running around!

Hudson Filonowich

Haha. Literally could not have been born into better circumstances

Vorquel

That's not something you see everyday

The Walrus Transcendent

Thediem is gonna end up with like three dozen adoped kids at this rate.

Ben Bass

TYFTC! That was fun to see a new dungeon spawn like that! I like the thought of it being watched/helped out by the ‘alliance’ of dungeons. Southwood being the closest could help out, and this could be a great learning experience for Southwood, as mentors learn just as much as mentees do.

Blacksun317

A new baby dungeon! I wonder how they will raise this one.

blaze87b

Tarl and Berdol are gonna be fucking legends when it comes out that he witnessed a dungeon spawn in real time

13L00D13ANE

I like the Southwood idea. Also kinda a light/dark dichotemy between them, that could be cool

Eriach

Dude....

Geoff Urland

Elf guy is going to become pretty famous is this keeps up. I worry though that people could manipulate this process to farm dungeons.

Sonata Fauns

Did Teemo, Yvonne, and Tarl just have a baby? But in seriousness that’s awesome that there’s a new dungeon for the coalition to help grow.

Geoff Urland

Baby dungeon!

Preswolfwood

Another Member of the Alliance! The question is who will be the mentor? Violet is coming along great but I’m not sure she is ready to step out from behind Thedeim, maybe Southwood?

ColdBlooded Network

This is early in the day.


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