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Peek: A Flower in the Garden

🕑 Added 2024-08-12 00:16:41 +0000 UTC

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BrokenLord321

Well if we're teaching punnett square we might as well start with flowers or pea plants like the original.

Herakilla

Thanks for the peek!

Ben Bass

TYFTP! Punnett squares! Yay HighSchool biology! I love how Thediem is able to take the idea of DNA and bust out Punnett squares to allow the baby scion to not be completely crushed by his ideas and thoughts. I really love seeing things from the perspective of the scions, it really helps in world building!

Gregs_Crow

my question is, how fast will the tree be grown to get an appropriate size for delvers to play around in?

mly85lc

All this talking about grafting and blending thighs together. Leaves me thinking. Wouldn’t it be nice if MC dungeon acpect and godhood acpect blended tougher? Enter angel/Valkyrie rat's. Since Temons is alredy his voice and therefore closes to "his" godhood. How about forcefully raising rat spawner higher lvls giving them ablity form MC "god sides" to touch and deliver them to his kingdom/heaven (or back form there do "change of state" for monument in living world) -giving this new rats ability to touch souls. -Boht living and deaht- By forming transparent limps form theyry bobys that while unable hurt living directly theyry still able distribute theyry construction and bobys moments. -maybe even give them some form of slow working paralysis claws. -and since theyry rise sprit/angel hood becoming Temons [the voice] give them ability to shot small ranges "condensed voice bullets" whit "changed elements" on them. And as nood theyry dungeons contention -yes Temons again- give them ablity to make [displacements jumps trought space] Not "teleporting" just a quick conetion of one places to ohter. -That can be blocked by butting something "dense" on theyry way.- ablity that requires theyry seeing they target whit the snouts giving the angles of moments. -and lastly give them ablity to [air step/air grap/reality pushing] a repeatedly by using too pair of legs to push or pull.. 3-5 time in round before cool down set in. -as final touch give them bit more intelligence and personality and let Temons being telepathic conetion to group of them that mirrors and mixs his and MC conetion alongside one that queen ants and bees have theyry helpers -and lastly have Ratkins form a custom of makeing them personal armors. Sure theyry can come of bit OP. So make theyry coming back more time consuming and using higher ammout of resources -thous gods point included- and lower theyry numbers while leaving chances for "normal rats" Rises theyry "level" in time.

87894354

Indeed. I figure that Thediem was probably *trying* to shield the newborn plant from such big concepts, knowing how painful they can be (especially for newborns).

KebabowyKrol

Absolutely love these peeks from the scions perspectives

Timo Immig

I mean natural sciences maybe but there are a still a lot of things left with Engineering.

LinaBoeckwurm

This is such a sweet peak! Poppy might become my favourite scion! Though then again, that is what I always think after reading a chapter focused on one... You are just too dang good at making all the scions likeable and fleshed out and interesting!

Orion Belt

“the light is warming it wonderful” sounds a bit weird and “the size of a mountain, bhough laden heavy” should be “the size of a mountain, though laden heavy” This peek was nice and sweet

Demonlord

Thanks for the nice peek 😊 Poppy is really cute and smart. She'll figure out genetics in no time and that's kinda cool and scary 🙃

C

Short but good. Hopefully caravan arrives next.

Ethan Barrow

TFTP!! I think Poppy is gonna make a great new edition to the team.

Pete Magnuson

Shout-out to each scion having a different name for thedeim, absolutely cute touch for an absolutely wonderful story

Tyler Morrissette

TYFTP

Aerowarrier

Can’t wait to see her work with Grim, Honey, and Queen to create some beautiful works of art with those trees. Maybe even Rocky and Tiny can help with figuring out how to leverage her affinities properly to make it work. These two new scions are really cool already, can’t wait to watch them grow

Austin Miller

Yeah, didn't think about that, but life + fate with someone who understands genetics is kinda concerning. We're reaching possible levels of eugenics that would make Germany circa 1938 blush.

AssumedPseudonym

That just gives us something to look forward to. ^.~

m1872

Plant geneticists?? Thanks for the chapter!!

Hello!

Fantastic peek! I wonder if Khenal knows he gave a minor spoiler for the next chapter for the 5$ patreon people? The rainbats aren’t in the chapters listed for the 5$ people.

blaze87b

Just came to the realization that Thediem has created a scion for nearly every avenue of science. Don't know if I'm right or not, but well done

Staples01

Yay! Poppy and her punnet squares!

Sonata Fauns

We have the preppy but volatile, cheerleader Titania. And the quiet bookworm younger sister that loves biology.

Durphymcbob

Thanks for the Chapter! Punnett Squares! Magical plant crossbreeding, is little poppy going to be doing some selective breeding?

Presten

Did not expect her to latch on to punnett squares so quickly. She is a very smart little lady, that's for sure.


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