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Chapter 68 – Heal Brain
🕑 Added 2024-07-19 22:00:05 +0000 UTCThe days blended together, and then he was back in the trial.
Specifically, back he was here.
Tom grimaced as he looked around the cave that April had put him in. This was his seventh attempt, with the previous ones having all ended in failure.
“A little, but not too much.” He whispered to her. “Remember, April, if there’s too much brain damage, then I can’t cast. I just need a little injury.”
She did not respond to him, of course. They had already had this conversation, and there was only so much meddling she could do before her attempts to help started to hinder.
The same natural-cut tunnel as before was leading down from where he stood. Tom procrastinated, because he knew what awaited him when he reached the bottom. This threat was April’s solution to his challenge to create a scenario to facilitate a perfect and meaningful cast of Heal Brain. To do that, she needed something to hurt his brain, and the usual method of a mental attack was not available because he was immune to everything below tier-five, while anything above that was so powerful that it would kill him instantly.
No, what waited for him was mechanical damage. The monsters were like giant insects that would try to attach themselves to his head and zombify him.
They would kill parts of his brain and keep other sections intact. It was useful for what he needed, under the proviso that he managed to limit the time they had to turn him into a meat puppet. Give them long enough, anything more than two seconds, and the GOD’s shield was going to be triggered.
With faltering steps, he advanced down the corridor.
There was a flicker of movement and he reacted, lashing out with his spear before it got too close. His weapon glowed blue with a hint of lilac as it connected with the creature springing at him. It sheared straight through the monster that resembled a stick insect the size of his forearm, with a proboscis as long as one of his fingers.
Tom knew from experience exactly what that dedicated part of its anatomy was. Its job was to get into his brain and take control.
He stamped on the larger half of the dead body. There was no need for the added violence, because it was already dead. Its physiology was similar to most things in that cutting it in half was, in fact, lethal.
“Calm, Tom, calm,” he whispered as he marshalled his breathing and pacified the feeling of revulsion that the mind eater’s presence had caused.
He had been expecting one of them, but not this soon. It was too early, and it worried him that April had changed the scenario up on him. Normally there would be no enemies for another twenty metres. He knew April was continually tweaking in the background, but she hadn’t warned him of any change in this scenario, and this was a big tweak.
With cautious steps, he proceeded forward. There was a rough patch on the natural cave wall, an area of deeper shadow that might have been concealing something. He poked it with his spear tip to ensure nothing was hiding in the space. There was no reaction, and he didn’t think this particular type of brain-eating monster was capable of resisting its baser instincts.
The area was clear.
Another two steps, and he slowed down. He licked his lips. It had been too long since that last attack. It didn’t match with the way April usually did things.
The coarseness of the walls and overall lighting were getting worse and worse. There were more and more spots that something less than a size of a football could be hiding within. The sensing spell that he had manually created from Spark was, of course, active. But it could only find things that were moving. If they were just huddling there, if they remained still, he wasn’t going to sense them until they attacked.
He swallowed and slowed further down, then poked each of the suspicious patches of deep shadows.
He pulled his spear back and saw a flicker of movement in the wider hole he had just disturbed. He leapt backwards instinctively as far as he could.
Spear Mastery aided the process, subtly guiding his feet to better avoid stumbling on the rough ground, and ensured that his spear was back, yet ready to be thrust at anything that threatened him.
Out of the hole, which had been at shin level on the wall, two monsters burst out. Like wolves, they coordinated, splitting up one going low and crossing the corridor to approach from his left, while the other scampered up the wall to the right, rapidly reaching head height.
Bastards, he thought to himself. Amongst all the other tools they had, it was unfair that they coordinated as well as they did, but all of his other failed attempts had taught him to expect nothing less.
Two, even if they were flanking him like this, were fine. He could take two at once. He was going to need to be quick and precise with each of his attacks, but he could do it without magic. It was doable. He could take them.
Danger Sense, which had been a threatening hum since April had deposited himself in the tunnel, spiked.
Tom almost jumped, but turned the instinctive motion into retreating further away from them.
A third and a fourth insect appeared.
Tom recognised the setup. More were definitely coming.
The first two, thankfully, didn’t wait.
They leapt to attack.
The one on the ground was moving slightly faster than the one on the wall, so he destroyed the former first. Power Strike was making his weapon glow blue and ensured the effectiveness of the cut. Then he struck the other one on the wall with the butt of his spear, driving the wood into the centre of its body. There was a thud as the force went through to the wall that the insect was pinned against.
When he pulled his weapon back, his enemy limply fell under gravity to smack onto the ground. Tom was not tricked, as he had fought these things before. It was not dead; instead it was probably no more than momentarily stunned. If he was lucky, he would get thirty seconds, but it could be as short as one. Unfortunately, there was no time to stab it to death, as the others were already approaching rapidly. The second wave had already grown to be five in total. With his brain racing, he retreated while wondering if it was even possible to kill this many, even if aided by magic.
He didn’t want to die again.
He was almost running backwards with his spear lashing out in front of him to delay them as long as possible. They would catch him. It was a forgone conclusion. Despite their smaller size, he couldn’t flee from them. They were too fast, far quicker than he was, and he was retreating not to escape, but to buy time and hopefully fool them into abandoning their pack mentality. One at a time, he could kill them quickly, but if they coordinated, he was dead.
It wasn’t working. When he stabbed at them, they just retreated and then the other side would close into the space where his spear wasn’t.
With a curse, Tom turned the tables on them. He stopped retreating, and the fight was on. Unfortunately, his aggression did not phase them the way he had hoped it would. Neither collectively nor individually was there any hesitation, and they attacked him as one.
Spark, fuelled by precognition mana, arced out to shock them. It didn’t go where he had targeted it; instead, the energy flowed unevenly, with more power being redirected to his weak side and less to the ones he had decided to target with his spear. Tom put it out of his mind and went deep into his battle training. In a trance, he went through the spear forms with a terrifying speed and precision. These monsters were susceptible to being stunned, and that bought a moment and made them simple to target.
The three creatures going for his head died. One of them, possibly smarter than the others, went for his waist. The move was so surprising that he had left himself wide open. All he could do was twist to push a hip at it to stop it from striking his more vulnerable stomach.
There was a sharp pain as it plunged its proboscis into him. It was too far away from his brain to impact him directly, but having a living, moveable, sucking dagger penetrate him still hurt, and, before it could run up his torso, he moved to seize the insect monster with his hand.
His reaction was only just fast enough, as, moments before his grasping fingers arrived, it had withdrawn its proboscis and had started to move upwards. Tom seized it around its undefended torso, then instinctively pushed it down and away from his vulnerable head. It reacted by lashing out. This time, its proboscis dug into his upper leg, and he was certain it broke his femur.
Only a small fraction of his brain focused on negating that issue. The majority of his attention was on the two brain eaters who were still alive and coming for him.
One-handed, he met them. With the spear as his main weapon, it was awkward, but it was something he had already trained for. In Existentia, you never knew when you might lose a limb.
Even with one hand, courtesy of a deft use of Spark and two quick stabs he was able to eliminate them easily. There was still the issue held in his hand, but the wave had been dealt with. He had done it. The whole thing felt anticlimactic. Defeating seven creatures in quick succession was not supposed to be that uneventful. Yes, he had been hurt, but a single hip wound was nothing.
Danger Sense went up multiple decibels. He had forgotten that these things were swarm-minded. It was not over, because they were smarter than that, and they were happy for all but one of them to die, providing they got their target. Too late for it to matter, he recognised the likely additional avenue of attack and attempted to look up.
Something smashed into the back of his head.
There was instant pain, but he didn’t let that stop him. The spear was unwieldy at the best of times, but with only a single hand directing the weapon, it was horrifyingly slow. The pain in his head intensified, and, from experience, he knew what was coming.
He had one chance, and he didn’t want to fail. He didn’t want to die pointlessly again, and, no matter what they said, a GOD’s shield left psychological scars even when it worked.
The spear spun, glowing with Power Strike and struck the creature and only just in time. He could feel the rising numbness, and the fingers of the hand that held the spear spasmed and released it. His whole body reacted similarly, with only one exception. The hand holding the creature that had attacked his hip was reinforced with magic. Those were unaffected by the loss of nerves ordering actions, because his magic had long since supplemented them. That hand remained firmly locked on the monster, even if what the other one had done to his head meant he couldn’t feel it anymore.
Pain as a concept had been purged, as had his ability to balance.
His body crashed into the ground, but Tom didn’t care. His brain had suffered potentially lethal injuries, but was still functioning. He could still think. Usually by this stage it was over, but this time he had a chance. His best yet.
He formed the spell as precisely as he could, and only paused to spend fate with a focus on getting a useful brain sideways evolution. He wanted something to ensure that, even if his brain was injured, his consciousness wouldn’t be impacted. With the fate invested and the spell form as perfect as he could make it, he cast it, and hoped that his eight points of unattributed mana and ten of precognition was sufficient to fix the open wound in his head.
If he had Touch Heal already, eighteen points would have been more than enough, but he wasn’t sure how inefficient Heal Brain was.
There was an immediate ding.
He hoped it signified outrageous success like it happened with what he had done with his heart, but there was no time to think about it. He could feel pain again, and his limbs were once more back under his control. There was no time to indulge in his mini-victory, because the fight was not over.
His hip ached, and, without assessing it magically, he could feel the torn skin and broken bones. His hand still had the creature trapped within it, but, judging by the way it was twisting and struggling to escape, it was only a matter of time until it got free.
He snatched one of the knives that was always sheathed at his chest and stabbed down recklessly -once, twice, three times, and then a fourth and a fifth.
His second attack nicked his own finger, but he didn’t care. A point of mana closed that wound, and he kept stabbing until the monster was dead. Then, once it was taken care of, his attention turned back to the one he had stunned by crushing it between his spear and the wall.
When he checked it out, it was starting to twitch. It hadn’t recovered enough to move yet, but that was only a matter of time. He stretched out to retrieve his weapon, then he pushed himself to his feet, using it as a crutch. Forced to use only one leg because the side that had been proboscised was not functional, he stumbled toward the final monster to kill it. Three painful steps got him was close enough. The spear tip pressed against its central body. It flared blue and then punched through the monster as though it was butter.
He immediately sagged in relief. The pain had been interfering with his thinking process.
“April, some help.” He called out, knowing that none of the injuries he had suffered were lethal and all the enemies were dead or disabled.
A moment later, he was in the café, and the pain was a memory.
He took a sip of too hot coffee and shuddered. “I hate those things. Too fast, crawly, and, if you make one minor mistake, you’re dead. I hate mind eaters.”
“Them being mind eaters is not the problem.” April told him. “You’ve only struggled because they were rank seven. Even if it was a ridiculously, and I do mean ridiculously favourable match up, beating multiple monsters six times your rank is incredible. However, most people have a horrible time against them. In addition to what you saw, they have a potent debilitating mind attack that stuns most opponents, especially other monsters. You were lucky in that you could straight-out ignore that. Those things can take out enemies twice their rank. But, for what we needed, they were an effective catalyst, even if a creepy one.”
“Were they?” he asked hopefully, while waving at the familiar clipboard. “I’m confident I got the spell Heal Brain. But did I get a bonus?”
She frowned and handed the clipboard over. “No, not this time.”
“Damn it. I was so sure, with all the preparations...”
“You got the sideways evolution with your heart. It’s not going to happen every time.”
“True. I was hoping for something similar for my brain. I want to be able to take a head injury and keep going.”
She made a funny face. “Keep your craziness up, and maybe you’ll find another way to get that. Personally, I’m just happy that I no longer have to set you up to almost die.”
“Well, it’s not over yet. I still need Heal Organs, and then Touch Heal.”
“A standard fight should be enough for both of them. What was needed for brain and heart was at another level. It sucked.”
“Sucked, did it… That’s… um… ah.”
“Yes, it did,” she said defensively. “Don’t think for a moment that I enjoy doing this.”
“It’s just that… Well, I’m the one suffering, so shouldn’t I be the one complaining?”
She laughed. “True. Unless we take into account that you’re a psycho masochist and your kink makes you enjoy this.”
Tom’s mouth opened in shocked surprise. “No, I’m not. It’s… No, it’s not like that.” His eyes narrowed. “Wait a moment. You’re teasing me.”
She started laughing harder. “If you want to believe that, Tom, I can’t stop you.”
“It’s true. If the bonuses weren’t so important, there is no way I would be doing this.”
“I know, Tom. Now, this topic is uncomfortable for me. But I don’t make a habit of judging perverted biological instincts, so you don’t need to worry.”
“April!”
“So, moving right along. I’m assuming the plan is Heal Organs this session and Touch Heal next?”
He hesitated, then decided that changing topics was a good idea. Continuing would just be digging the hole deeper.
“Tom, what stupidity are you considering?”
He needed something to distract her, and there was one thing that he had been contemplating, but knew she would object to. “I was considering,” he told her, “Whether to even bother attempting to get Heal Organ today.”
“I don’t see why you wouldn’t. You’ve got another twenty-six hours here. Which will put you at full fate again. You might as well attempt it. It’s not like you can do something this dangerous in the outside world, because you won’t have a GOD’s shield there.”
“I can,” Tom promised her, thinking about the array of poisons available in the hidden cupboards. “I can absolutely cause multiple organ failure.”
“It’s not like you can do it safely.” April corrected herself. “It’s infinitely better to do it here.”
Tom shook his head. While the idea had started as a distraction, the moment he had said it, it had felt right with a certainty he couldn’t ignore. “No, I think doing it today is a waste of fate.”
“How will fate be wasted?”
“It’s unlikely I’ll naturally get a perfect cast the first time, and, if that’s the case, all the invested fate will go toward that instead of a sideways evolution. I expect Heal Organ to be difficult. I’ve never combined so many different spell forms together into a single evolution. If I delay, I’ll have plenty of time to practice that process. Even if I’m not meaningfully casting the spell, just recreating it a thousand times before going for real will help. My fate reserves are too valuable to waste on a probable failure, not to mention the attempt potentially costing a sideways evolution. No, today I’ll use them to gain Instant Strike, as planned.”
Comments
Daniel
Wait, did Heal Heart happened 'off screen'?
Hazel Wolf
I get that he couldn’t be mentally attacked, but the next level up was brain-eating insects? What happened to a gold old concussion for brain damage? 😂
Casual Ham
"I expect HealOrgans to be difficult" should have a space between Heal and Organs, and "No, today I’ll use them to gain InstantStrike as planned.” should be " Instant Strike".
Corwin
At this point he has been precise and demonstrated skill with daggers. All the cutting, and stabbing he has done to himself; the bats he has fought and engaged with; and finally the training he has done with April, stabbing, cutting, and throwing. These have been his actions, intentions, and demonstrated skills. He wouldn't be stumbling into a skill at all at this point
Arnon Parenti
Tom is hunting a Dragon with a known weakness, we know exactly what is needed to kill it and Tom is building up to it. The precognition affinity is to face Makros, a literal GOD who is going mad and Tom will need to fight blind and deaf so the GOD can't follow his moves.
Sanket More
No problem, I was just spitballing random plot devices. Harry Potter uses the three hallows and 7 horcruxes as a type of plot device to kill a lich. It would be nice if the progression in this book to led some sort of end goal. I think it would be a lot more meaningful if he had to win the tournament to get some plot device for instance.
Allan Greenwood
I'm going to bed now but I'll post something tomorrow. But basically 95 config is times 13 power, 96 is times 60 of something, 98 is times ten thousand. 100 is basically impossible it's absolute domain over the element. I.e. the most intense lightning ever and can fill all the area you can see with it type of power
Sanket More
It would be cool if he finds out that he needs 100 precog affinity for a “special” class, but it’s not possible to have a natural affinity over 95. He needs to collect 5 rare affinity stones before he unlocks his first class. Those affinity stones are found at 5 different trials, but they have been lost to time. However, the prize for the upcoming tournament is an artifact from the first civilization, which may lead to the trials. When he wins the tournament, he finds that the prize is a not a map, but a slightly unhinged and reckless fire spirit that belonged to a blacksmith. The spirit remembers some details that help find the first trial which helps find the second and so on. Eventually, they find all 5 passing trials related to kindness, vengeance, forgiveness, clarity, and will. With 100 precog and a spirit Tom unlocks a godling class and precogs a plan to organize humanity to beat the other species, resurrecting the 5 ancient weapons of the city to kill and replace a god.
Arnon Parenti
It has to be precise and meaningful, can't stumble into skills.
Arnon Parenti
Can he get instant strike in the lairs with the ring on full power deprivation ? That could be awesome and maybe lead to an earned skill where he gets extra fate by a percentage of precognition mana he has unused, it would balance over making them mutually exclusive, he can get a full power on the start or hang on to fill his temporary fate strike.
Allan Greenwood
Yeah I agree. I have Touch Heal, Instant Strike to Give him... hopefully two chapters and then can create a change of pace.
Arnon Parenti
I know it's the format and in a binge or a book this would be an awesome training arc leading to cool stuff later on, but in the web webnovel format it feels very stretched and losing touch with why I should care for Tom, if you have a slice of life or plot chapter planned later on, maybe shuffle it to the front and when editing the book you can reshuffle, just now it feels like a weeks long character creation and background before a years long campaign of ttrpg
James Faulkner
Anticlimactical isn’t a word, it’s anticlimactic :)
Corwin
With how often Tom is using a dagger I am surprised he hasn't picked up a trash tier 0 skill in it.
Allan Greenwood
I had to cut a dinner scene out of this chapter because I got 4 o'clock last night and realise I couldn't finish 4.5k in time but 3k was doable (yes this chapter was over 3k. That scene will be somewhere in the next couple of chapters)
Thomas
That seemed like a short chapter, even though it wasn't. Good job writing a very compelling chapter.
