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No Chapter today (15th / 16th of Aug)

🕑 Added 2024-08-15 20:10:26 +0000 UTC

Comments

Shannon Sexton

Love your work... cover art is hard, but this one doesn't speak to me. Seems a lot more young adult than serious author as I feel your work deserves.

Huseyin Yagli

Totally agree with you. Also, the monsters could be better drawn.

Allan Greenwood

This is for the previous series

Amazon Shopper

um, isn't that supposed to be a 6 year old? y r they fully grown???

Robert Reilly

I want to be encouraging here and say how incredible the vision of Tom that you have given us so far is. I love him, Existentia and his fight to make a place for humanity in it. In light of that I also think it’s only fair to the great story you’ve made so far, that its cover art is equally as compelling. Like Thomas, this piece doesn’t speak to me and like Max, I think a competition is a great idea. No matter what you end up with, I’ll continue to support the work!❤️

Thomas Tainter

I'ma give some constructive criticism if that's okay If it's not jokes on me cuz I still give you money Anyways I think that Tom looks a bit older than he should I think that a more streamlined image, with him facing off against maybe one of the monsters instead of 3, would look more appealing And the vibes it gives lean closer to "roman litrpg" rather than what it is

GSA

Idk if you'd consider holding a contest for cover design? Set up an email, submissions due a week from today, and the winning design gets a year of free patreon? This one doesn't speak to me