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Amendments (Chapter 102)
🕑 Added 2024-09-21 00:56:13 +0000 UTCA couple of things in my notes were excluded from the chapter by accident when I wrote it. I think I was rushing too much.
AUDIO file will not be updated because I physically don't have the lines available to do it in the software I use to generate chapters.
First the following is included when DUX asks him what compensation he wants.
“Share your thoughts no matter how outlandish they might seem.”
Tom felt a thrill of excitement. This was his chance. He looked Dux straight in the eye. “I need the Briana situation to be fixed.”
Instinctively, she shook her head. “No. This is not the type of opportunity that you’d use to solve that problem.”
“But it’s important to me. Please.” He waved the folder. “It’s more important than some stupid title. I don’t want to have to listen to her crying every night.”
“I know,” she answered patiently. “I know what you’re feeling, and I’ve already dealt with it. I’ve used a divine intervention to protect you and Kang. It’s not a perfect solution, but it’ll buy you time until you’re both ten. Then, providing you’re on good terms she can be protected by your title.”
Relief flooded through him. “Are you serious? Have you really?” He felt like crying and it was as if a huge weight had been lifted off his shoulders.
“Yes, it’s done, but,” She waggled her finger at him in a warning manner. “Don’t keep making those mistakes because I won’t always be able to bail you out.”
“Does that mean I can stop directing fate toward her?”
“Yes, it does, but Tom what you did was good. It reduced the cost to me to fix the mistake.”
“Dux, thank you. Thank you. You can’t understand how relieved this makes me.”
She laughed. “I am a GODDESS. trust me I do. Now let’s focus on the important stuff.” She tapped the folder. “What do you want improved or changed?”
Then the following is added into the final reward text.
Additional Negotiated Rewards.
· One million ranking points are to be transferred to the human’s total from the dragons.
· MAKROS (or proxy) will have no communications, explicitly or implicitly, with any individual or species about humans. This includes changing, accelerating, or cancelling any existing orders given to assassin teams. Breaking this condition will result in MAKROS immediately forfeiting the competition.
All the rewards were great. They were massive boons to him personally and to humanity, but Tom stared at that second last line. Everlyn and Dimitri were both going to flip when they saw his new ranking points.
Comments
CherMi
Initially Tom got ranking points to reflect that MAKROS spent divine interventions (although only 10 thousand per SUPREME ruling, but that's likely because the amount was contested). Now DEUS too spent an intervention, will Tom and Kang get points for this?
Arnon Parenti
Need to send some more points Tom's way, and that danger sense skill needs more levels.
Arnon Parenti
Kang will believe because invoking DEUS name this way without being ABSOLUTELY SURE you were right would be a suicidal blasphemy. No reincarnated would dare attempt blasphemy, they tried it at the tutorial, probably most of them had a Sven situation on the first week, they will never dare.
Shannon Sexton
Glad Brianna situation sorted. Interested to see how Kang takes it, if he even believes that Deus has intervened. Also looking forward to the complete status sheet. All titles, skills, spells, classes. Understand that this is too nerdy for some, but I hope it's included at least as a note or spoiler 😅
James Faulkner
Based edits, Tftc!
Scott Frederiksen
Nice add for the new last line so all preexisting attacks set up still play through and suffer due to this new title. 👍👍👌
