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Chapter 119 – Desperate Measures

🕑 Added 2024-10-25 21:00:07 +0000 UTC

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Fozzy

This is weird for me. When they were 5, I thought they spoke like 3 year olds. A 6 year old should sound "normal" without the use of advanced language. But a 6 year old should understand 15k to 20k words. I think the bigger contrast is the jump from toddler speak to kid speak.

Arnon Parenti

Just send them right along into the Explosive Growth Gauntlet Let the eager rank 200 fight his peers of rank 400 and see how much fun they have.

Allan Greenwood

There was a discussion on discord. I will be changing it. Not sure how but it'll probably happen tomorrow

Wiggles1

TFTC! I still think when this gets edited, Brianna and Eloise should talk more like 6 year olds. Sure they're smart, and two peers turned out to be poorly hidden adults. But I think in these circumstances they'd still use a mix of big and small words, and sometimes fumble the grammar.

George

ooh the darkhole trial transforming into one of the really good trial types would be pretty cool, although I guess it'd get this region conquered by the closest rank 200

George

tom's title gonna be the most op thing ever if briana gifts him her reward

Arnon Parenti

If you're still looking for prize ideas My top 10 list for prizes would be 1. Resurrection 2. Advanced system access 3. Private communal space for them to train and chat 4. Removal of hidden title restrictions 5. Traits improving the human racial ability 6. Eternal dungeon access 7. Time powers [haste/slow, freeze, rot, heal, loop, save, delete] 8. Space powers [storage and teleport] 9. Tutors 10. Full God's shield Token [extra life]

George

he's talking about eloise and briana not tom

Arnon Parenti

He isn't really 6, he is With tutorial 67 Without tutorial 27 Existentia age 7.3 Orphanage age 6 He had 40+ years of mental shattering tutorial to flare his emotions and damage his social skills to the max

Arnon Parenti

Rank Combat Rating

Ashley Cook

What does the R# and CR# mean?

Aaron Weingrad

It works ok but the level of emotional self awareness and accountability from a six year old feels a little too mature. Fewer words and slightly less articulate ones might serve her character and the story better.

George

I think every race has it? the big question is what if any geas covers the details of it

George

interesting, I really expect if you were going to kill someone off it'd be before they're knocked unconscious at the final boss

George

oh damn 6.5% from 6 hours is bad news

Crapgeezer

Yay, they got to the boss! Looking forward to next chapter 🔥

Fozzy

I can't wait to see what you come up with. I assume the rewards will come in the chapter after the boss fight.

James Faulkner

Damn, great job developing both Briana and Eloise’s characters. I was really bothered by both of them, but they’ve both grown massively and even Kang feels like a more positive part of the dynamic. Tftc!

Tenpoundtarantula

I can't remember - if the trial is beaten does it relocate? Like, can fate fuckery help move it and give another bumper boost if ranking points by dropping it onto a terror race?

Allan Greenwood

I've been reading the comments. But nothing said so far has swayed me away from the original rewards I thought of like four months ago beyond adding in an additional title

Fozzy

Sounds like you're asking for reward ideas. Since it's a growth-type trial, it could include double or triple levels at unlocking, or a percentage bump in attributes for each class level type of reward.

Arnon Parenti

Small fix “Have you got the rhythm he called out to Kang.” “Have you got the rhythm", he called out to Kang.

Arnon Parenti

I'm still weirded out by this whole two and a half months being outside the Existentia timeline so it's no time for most people and an hour for Corrine since she met R0 CR6 Tom and now it's R1 CR13 Tom. Not to mention R0 CR0 Brianna coming out as R1 CR11 Or R1 CR3 Kang coming out R1 CR7

Kory Smith

I appreciate you posting even with being sick or having family to take care of. This story has me just as hooked as Fate Points did when you were writing it, I’m always excited for a new chapter to read.

KipBR

Thank you for the chapter and for letting us know about the timing of the final part of the black hole trial! Knowing when it will happen makes waiting a lot less difficult!

Arnon Parenti

Everyone is a Heretic coming out of the EGG because GOBUS is a sore loser.

Pablo Lopez Gallego

TyFTC, I hope monday comes soon!!!

Arnon Parenti

Oh man, I so want Tom to remember how MAKROSS abused resurrection and to poke him in the eye with a returned Michael and Arnali

Daniel Playford

Thanks for the chapter, have fun with your family.

Celas

Minor typo impossible ask> impossible task

the oldest dream

Thanks for the chapter

Sanderson

Thanks for the chapter. This arc has been great. A good way to boost Tom’s abilities and get a bit of team stuff happening.

Monadologist

I'm really pleased that you didn't wind up dragging this floor out. We know where this is going, it is almost like Fate after all, let's get there. =)


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