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Chapter 121 – Darkhole Rewards

🕑 Added 2024-10-28 00:02:56 +0000 UTC

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GSA

I'm sorry, that sounds really hard. Prayers for you and your family

Ashley Cook

The love/heart is because I care. I'm sorry about your Dad. I'm sure your Mom appreciates all your help and support. You could always dedicate the book or a chapter to your Dad, or whatever feels appropriate to you. We can wait. Family is most important!

Nic Neal

Take your time. Nothing feels normal nor should it.

Allan Greenwood

My dad died Friday morning. I'm at my mum's supporting her. I'll probably start writing again tomorrow. So maybe in 40 hours or so

Dankin

When is next chapter?

Cam

An entire arm is considered roughly 9% of your body, adult or child.

Shannon Sexton

Same, except for Kang's survive 80% loss of your body... that we don't know.

Ashley Cook

They all live!!!! Yay!!!! Can't help but wonder did Eloise or Bri get different rewards?

Arnon Parenti

I wonder what the minimum percentage is for the loss of body % title to kick in, as Tom didn't get it even though he lost about 15 to 20% of his body in the boss fight. Also Tom having his own arm in his soul storage is hilarious and a great get out of bullies chasing you card like a lizard "regrowing" his torn arm in a split second would be a cracker.

Arnon Parenti

It started unsolicited, Tom even thinking the only way to win is keeping a clear mind.

Arkeus

Fairly sure the rage spike is just Tom considering anything that hurts Bri unfair.

Arnon Parenti

I'm saying this is a new incident where FAMES targeted Tom, granting him more heretic levels.

Shannon Sexton

No details other than those given through the Chapter 102 The Meddling Price.

Shannon Sexton

No. All Heretic Title levels are awarded from Markos's actions. L1 and L2 through Fate Points and T9 True Dreaming, Tom is aware multiple Gods are plotting against him and Markos yells at him. L4 is 2 more levels for becoming aware and calling out godly intervention during the competition. Last 2 levels, now L6 is because of Deus previously agreed outcomes if Tom in particular was targeted given previous targeting was agreed to be too much already.

Cam

Those are good points. But, I wonder if fate is even affected at all. Because fate is different and not part of the base stats, it might not.be increased when fighting higher ranked opponents. Have we seen it increased so far? I don't believe so, and I honestly assumed up to this point that it was base stats only.

Cam

Skill exhaustion doesn't apply to spells.

Cam

In fate points, they got rewards for completing trials bur then competition points on top of that. The rewards are what they are regardless of competition species or not.

Cam

I've forgotten, did we ever find out how or any details relating to fames blessing Tom? I don't remember that from the ending events of fate points. Was that off-screen?

Shannon Sexton

Tom needs to try the mana trick and find it is limited by 6 minutes mana regain just to remove brokenness from the trait.

Joe Black

I do like the idea of this being the start of a massive time jump. Its very clear now that we have an elite human squad that are not limited by their base attributes they will be absolutely wrecking house. I would not personally enjoy reading 3 more books of Tom and Bri slowly earning their spells and skills in each and every affinity. That said I think a quality drop for how he finally turns his 95 precog affinity into a mountain of spells would be warranted. That and a montage of 4 humans demolishing all of the terror races in the divine tourney would be great pay off. Also it going to be kinda sad how Corrine is going to get left behind unless you can somehow give her a big power boost. She did such a turn around in her character arch, but its pretty clear all she has to offer is raw spell casting power, and would be easily picked off if added to a hit squad with our new 4 heroes of humanity and eve. I am kinda worried you will have to pull something very unplausible out of your ass again like Eve doing better than Tom on the trial he got his earth magic in to even them out, when it would really take 5 things that the 4 could likely get even more out of at the same time. I really have been enjoying this new story, and am looking forward to you writing more intercharacter drama like the old story had. I think you have probably learned where some of the murder plot went wrong by being so wrung out. I would also caution you on giving Tom another ability like his golem crafting. It always seemed tacked on to things, and not as impactful as it should have been with so many options being toned down from the original over powered ability that was first shown. The constant destruction of them making the limitless upgrading meaningless was so frustrating, and then they all just had a huge level boost at the end meaning it wasn't impactful in the dragon fight. I really think this story would be made better if we don't have so many forgotten avenues to power which I know is hard as you need to constantly be adding new cool things, but the amount of screen time the golem got to not really matter in the end just added so much bloat to your work.

Sanderson

Wow, great finish to this mini arc. Thank you.

Aaron Weingrad

Tftc

Arnon Parenti

Correct, it's confirmed in The Meddling Price, so it's Fames' Meddling that gives Tom this extra Heretic title

AL

I think the rage spike originates from FAMES' blessing. Not sure the Heretic title would apply here if he became suddenly aware of it.

AL

Would be great to see a summary of his status page, i am loosing track of everything he gained since reincarnated

Arnon Parenti

This changes Tom's Meta combat significantly as he is much stronger against swarms than a single op enemy. It would be better for him to whittle down the whole group than to kill them 1 by one.

Arnon Parenti

I read it as 1=70 2=80 3=90 4=100 5=110 Max reached.

Pablo Lopez Gallego

The problem is the skill exhaustion

Arnon Parenti

If you weren't blind and deaf to Fate before, you certainly are now for weeks at least.

Arnon Parenti

I hope Tom realizes the rage spike was GOBUS meddling in his Trial and gets another boost to his Heretic Title. Also granting Kang, Brianna and Eloise the Heretic title because a GOD plotted their deaths and directly interfered against their Fate.

Arnon Parenti

Listening to the chapter on the road I figured they pumped thousands and thousands of fate into the EGG, all this Fate exploded when the Trial ended, to anyone even remotely sensitive to fate fluctuations this is going to look like a nuke exploded in the middle of the human settlement. The augurs and oracles trying to spy on them are going to lose fate sensitive organs and blame Tom for it again, like the Wador did, assassins are going to flee like it's ground zero and Godzilla has woken up hangry.

Wiggles1

Suggestions for "Trait: Explosive Growth Equaliser": -As written it adds 70% of a stat gap for 1 opponent, or 10% for 2 opponents. Anything less than 14 opponents has strictly worse effect than 1 opponent. Suggest making it 70% for the highest rank opponent, plus 5% for any additional higher-rank opponents. Or, start with 70% for the first opponent that aggros him. Or something else, so long as the performance doesn't catastrophically drop when a 2nd opponent aggros. -It should state explicitly whether he can lose stats this way, eg if a higher-rank opponent has less magic than him, does he lose magic? -Also, there should be rules for what happens when enemies die during combat. Does he get an instant stat decrease, or a ramp-down, or a few seconds' warning followed by an instant decrease? -The audience doesn't necessarily need to know now, but you should decide what counts as combat. Eg if it's a 10-on-10 fight where he's only got 1 opponent, does he get 10 opponents' stat difference, or 1 opponent?

Arnon Parenti

At least he can see the boot coming

Arnon Parenti

Corrine Drama is the best drama, she is about to find out she was pushed from strongest in the orphanage to contender on 3rd place with Kang, this will be Epic Drama.

Wiggles1

So basically, in FP he was around Evelyn and Keikan, so it was easy to put himself in consequentialist mode.

Allan Greenwood

I wouldn't worry about this. I haven't done all the planning but I have 25 chapters to cover ten years. Some drama will make it into those chapters and some may be in the divine Champions trial but I won't be covering the performance of side characters unless it's important for the main plot. Just like we haven't really followed what Corrine has been up to

Allan Greenwood

No it wouldn't. They are rank seventy. 4 times mulplier of his rank 1.5 stats takes him to a rank of 7. The trait caps out at 40 ranks which gives him a rank of 47 and then he gets squashed

CherMi

The rewards are very nice, but they probably mean both girls and Kang are now in line to get into the divine trial. Can't say I'm eager to read about that drama.

Marvincardo

Just out of curiosity does this mean Tom can now theoretically call kill assassins ? No mater stat difference if he is boosted to 70% of their stats then uses the 4x stat multiplier. He should be at least be able to fight them. Or does the base stat mean it would only take into account his original stats? Even if he is just at 70% speed I think there is potential, though much lower.

Eli Gray

Excellent chapter.

Arnon Parenti

Thanks for the chapters, the whole arc was fun, especially in light of the time dilation and how it's going to mess up everyone, good and bad.

AL

Yeah definitely some kind of Regen boost ability

Arnon Parenti

Lols on Adam being sassy with Tom, who gets to chew on his own hubris again.

George

I think everyone will individually get their points for what they go do with the trait

George

oh good call, that mana production would have been huge in this exact trial scenario

Scott Frederiksen

maybe something like a percentage increase to health regen based on how much damage you currently have sustained. Like at 100% health there is no increase, 95% health would be a 5% increase or something like that?

Fozzy

Any competition ranking points for completing the trial?

Fozzy

Allan, you made me feel off-base with my suggested reward of % attribute increase per class level. I nailed it though.

Allan Greenwood

Damn it. I already have two much in the next 30 chapters but Eloise taking on Joseph is too good to ignore

Crapgeezer

Thanks Allan, you're a beast! Also these rewards are brrrroken!

Arnon Parenti

Poor Joseph, one second he is chasing a defenseless screaming Eloise, and the next he has to face a fully traumatized fight response from an Explosive Growth Gauntlet survivor who can kill rank 7 monsters. I got you now FWOOSH What was that? Why am I in the clinic for assassination attempt survivors? Help? Where is my hand?

James Faulkner

Tftc!!

Evan Van Dyke

Could be hard to tell right now since he is surrounded by so few people. Still enjoying the story either way

George

a crafter with the conqueror title gifting tom stuff would be crazy

George

take your time man those are long hours to pull

Nimps

With the communication trait is it 1 min per person per day or is it more that if you accept the invitation it counts towards your use too? Effectively, since they all passed the trial does that mean they have 4 uses per day? Because that's pretty bloody strong, even mid fight!

Solopath

Reading over the Attribute boost trait, I have a couple of ideas for using it. Using consecutive stacks is nice, but the free mana gained when first boosting is also amazing. Tom can quadruple his mana pool, use three times his max mana to cast spells, let the buff wear off, and then repeat, for as many times as he has charges. I'm also curious how it will interact with the Fate attribute. Fate doesn't count towards the rank calculations, so the multiplier might not get capped like it would for the other attributes. Even if the pool doesn't start filled up there are enough abilities we've seen that provide a percentage of fate or care about the total fate pool for it to be a powerful tool going forwards.

George

man, it's crazy how much of a loose cannon kang is 😂

im Panda

Tyftc

Scott Frederiksen

Nice rewards, I thought the girls would pop in too but I guess is not an auto group invite?

KipBR

Honestly I really like the current balance and I think you are doing great.

Allan Greenwood

I would argue in fate points he was too indifferent to the death of a single person. Having said that he still doesn't care that much. It's only really Briana that he cares about and he may grow up to care about others around him, dim, Corrine, Kang and eloise but possibly not...

John Anastacio

I propose - One fifth the man he used to be.

Evan Van Dyke

I wonder what his title was…

Solopath

Great chapters, and I'm glad everyone is alive, even if I could see one of the girls decide to focus on a crafting career due to combat trauma.

Evan Van Dyke

Thanks for the chapters! I know it is part of his character but Tom’s constant angst over the death of single people is getting a bit tired at least to me. Surely he can grow up to realize survival of the species is worth more? Sure he is willing to sacrifice himself, but he can’t tolerate others doing the same….

the oldest dream

Thanks for the chapter

John Anastacio

Thanks very much for the chapter and for not making us wait for it. Surprised they all survived, though poor poor Kang.


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