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Chapter 110 – Completing Floor 1

🕑 Added 2024-10-10 21:00:06 +0000 UTC

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gordianTangle

lesson -> lessen

Allan Greenwood

Her voice is quite annoying in the audio :-). She's a little confident know it all. I'm sure she's very endearing to her parents.

Jeremiah Arias

First off thanks for the speedy reply and secondly I can see that now that you put the annoying little friend part. I guess it was bc earlier on she didn't really seem annoying to me yes she was getting into trouble with the bullies and running off, I guess I was more focused on Tom's viewpoint so her situation kinda came off a little dull but thanks again and for the chapter

Allan Greenwood

He's treating them differently because of an unconscious bias. He sees Briana as his little sister and Eloise is his little sisters annoying friend. His reactions has nothing to do with which is personality is better or who is an asset for humanity. Almost everything about his reactions are emotion based.

Jeremiah Arias

I only ask this because I genuinely like this more than the original fate points and don't want this flaw if it's not A) intentional or B) a passive /unconscious obstacle

Jeremiah Arias

Hey I had a question, is Tom only caring for Bri bc my first impression of this dark hole dungeon arc with Bri he's soft and incorrigible when Bri is messed with, but when Eloise got in here he's like not giving her a care like last episode even though she gave him a arcane dagger. I mean don't get me wrong she's not the bestfriend but her reasons for being involved are pure and she had no clue. I've yet to see him go off on bri in which he hasn't softened up almost immediately (could be him projecting his sister on her but, even then with an adult mind he's still not able to distance the idea just a little)

Arnon Parenti

Tom is repeating the same mistakes he made in fate points by disrespecting his teammates and taking everything on himself. It's what lost him his relationship with Everlynn and what killed him in the end. He needs a good slap before something worse happens. Give the Light Sabre to Jedi Eloise. Teach the storm witch how to cast lightning. Hogging the glory will kill Kang.

jumbosauce

Yeah, I'm enjoying these payoff chapters. Tom's plans and risk-taking are working out well...for now, haha

Zed

We make it all we don’t > we make it or we don't?

Allan Greenwood

I've shot them through in a dm

AL

Thanks. It definitely rings a bell but I can't remember the details of the title. Will check again;)

Allan Greenwood

If you read fate points. It's one of the titles that he go at the same time as Known Heretic the first time. If you haven't read Fate Points, Tom's unaware of the where the ability has come from but just knows he has it.

AL

Which ability is reflecting mental attacks again?

Keegan Moss

I’m getting a feeling that either Eloise or Briana dies in the next 4-5 chapters for some amount of plot motivation

Shannon Sexton

Ahh... Murder hobo bro! See you in existentia!

KipBR

Thank you for the chapter!

James Faulkner

Tftc!

Thomas Tainter

All of the chapters this week have remedied all the things I was missing since unhinged fury started


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