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Chapter 113 – Hidden Dangers

🕑 Added 2024-10-15 21:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Dankin

Could kang and the girls ask Adam not to speak to anyone but Tom so that Tom could lie freely about the weapons?

Casual Ham

This is a good point. If Adam is allowed to create Grade 0 items for them to use, why not ask for a pair of goggles and see if Tom or Kang can find a way to enhance them?

DagNabItAll

This was the 9th or 10th chapter, and the pacing is fine with me. We are most of the way through it now I guess.

Shannon Sexton

Glad it's just me. This is my favourite read this decade.

im Panda

The bracelets popped for the GIRLS, it's no danger for the guys, that's why they never had to replace theirs. The chapter is fine, and the switch to angry Tom was well written

Corwin

Every floor is too deadly for the girls...water would at least make Bri a viable fighter with razor water. Though jungle should have wood for Tom to use to make a T3 spear

Allan Greenwood

It might unfortunately be monday or tuesday... when I put together the character stuff I needed to show, i.e. Kang's good side, Briana's bravery and Eloise what ever she does... my estimates were a little off.

Amazon Shopper

There is spike of danger then a lul into complacency- followed by another spike which is super anxiety inducing. Unhinged fury has many psychological thriller elements(the assassins watching, the sewers, ect.). This is very “on brand” for the story

Amazon Shopper

Tftc

Shannon Sexton

I would flag this chapter for review. I know feelings ebb and flow, but it seems to be more inconsistent than usual. Danger sense bracelets in use mean that the girls are in real danger, new monster to come, Kang showing instability and then they say that there's no real danger???

ZaA

I feel like kang could totally make some sunglasses for tom. If not even Adam.. just darkened glass or plastic should be more than within his rules, and if kang added a thin layer of shadow as well, it'd probably work. Goggles would be even better actually

Arnon Parenti

Aquatic will be too deadly for the girls I think, but a good thick jungle will be fun.

Corwin

Here is to hoping that the next floor is fauna or aquatic

KipBR

Tftc

KipBR

On Friday the author said that the dungeon should be over this week. Also, it's really different when serialized, it wouldn't drag on if it was in a book format.

Arnon Parenti

Why not ask Adam for sunglasses, or make their own? Tom can make sherpa snow goggle out of wood or they could darken a glass cup and set it in a helmet if Adam can't provide them.

Marvincardo

Tyftc!

Marvincardo

I think Kang would agree…. Lol

travis pancake

Love the story but this arc is really starting to feel like it's dragging.

the oldest dream

Thank you for the chapter

C. O. P

Thank you very much!

Talen Drake

First TYFTC!


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