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Chapter 136—A Reminder of Priorities

🕑 Added 2024-12-31 21:16:32 +0000 UTC

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Arnon Parenti

Lunge is a Spear skill and it's intangible component is Velocity. Can Tom apply it to his Remote Power Strike and change his trajectory mid lunge? The wording is a little too specific so may need to get some Fateful evolutions in to make it work. Skill: Intangible Power Strike – Tier 2 Allows non-physical aspects of Power Strike to be conveyed on a spear controlled by the user or a neutral spear to a distance of twenty-four metres

Arnon Parenti

Telling Wador, Supreme and Sanatores that MAKROSS and FAMES were literally stealing from their candidates.

Arnon Parenti

That sword is gonna kill Teddy. Twas Thormus and his nilly frills with gumption and aplomb. Thormus' gum had said to him don't dawdle at the Cromb. The Korgus dwells it stirs and spells and none of you shall be. Yet Thormus thrust his Physics Blade at Korgus by the Cromb. It smashed it bashed it part it's head and no more Korgus droned.

Arnon Parenti

It thought Tom was going to kill him for the first "half" of the fight. I hope the next chapter is DEUS getting some good stuff for Tom's next Heretic Title now that the other GODs were caught red handed manipulating the DCT, and this time they have no excuse of not knowing it was Tom as there are only 2 humans in the Trial. Also would be nice if Corrine got some Heretic title for her trials being manipulated to kill Tom.

Scott Frederiksen

TYFTC Cool interaction! and lots of gifted weapons. I hope there is some variety in the duplicates unless they're all so oversized that they need the physics one. I have to double check if there were any spears in there though I know there were hammers. WIN!

Randy Marks

I thought the whole thing where he goes in without a shield if he's going to win thing would be pretty bad if he went against more neutral beings who also went in without a shield. I was glad to see this protocol in place, as I was very curious to see how all that would play out. It seemed sort-of unlikely because most beings Tom could defeat would go in with a shield or be terror races, of necessity, and this creature's body makes that an understandable exception. I've enjoyed the story a lot so far, and am really enjoying these rapid time skips with vignettes. This has been my favorite chapter in a while: to see the different dynamics, and to have Tom be a little more confident/less defensive emotionally, and the other alien actually seemed like a child (as in naive), even though most of the aliens Tom interacts with seem more mature than he is. This chapter flowed really well!

Marvincardo

Fun chapter! Happy New Year!!

Adurna

Pretty solid difference between a bet and a gift though. Perhaps a bribe for him to risk something later outside the orphanage, however.

Nimps

Ohhh, I wonder if he can trick any MAKROS or FAMES representatives to gift him items as part of a "bet" for winning the match? If they are arrogant enough they might? Perhaps the teddy bear?


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