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Rift of Souls Episode 2 — Reconnected
🕑 Added 2023-04-01 04:22:41 +0000 UTCChapters 4-6 of Rift of Souls. 5,800 words. Dysphoria warning — it's really rough near the end in this one!
This story can't really claim to be AI-assisted anymore, all it did was help unstuck me like 3 times and help with some description in two spots. I've also been going back and editing the hell out of episode one cuz I realised just how much it overdid it on the description there.
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Chiri Vulpes
Sorry, accidentally sent the last message before I intended to, didn't expect enter to send and haven't used this UI before :p I've edited it. I might continue this story at some point, but I think I'd be editing the first couple chapters a bit again first, and also I need to finish some other projects first too. It is the story I think had the most promise, though, fwiw. I think this was like maybe halfway through?
Kaiyalai
I understand, and that makes sense. Also, just finished reading Episode 2 and my heart weeps for Annie. Really hoping Episode 3 brings some relief for her.
Chiri Vulpes
Sorry, I have no idea >.< I don't really play a wide variety of games, I don't really have the money to. With this story in particular I spent a lot of time trying to do something unique, incorporating some mechanical aspects of the few games I do play, like Warframe and Destiny 2. Which *are* scifi, but they're also extremely well known and I dunno if I'd really recommend either of them? Warframe is extremely grindy and Destiny is really expensive to get into it nowadays and everything about it feels incredibly stingy.
Kaiyalai
A bit past halfway through this episode, very loving it and hoping this story eventually continues, but before I forget to ask... What game or games might one play that would be similar to Rift of Souls, at least in terms of being a scifi MMO? Any particular recommendations?
