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[:::: Lucky, Chapter 12 - Part III ::::]

🕑 Added 2025-10-03 01:39:37 +0000 UTC

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Adam_Sephenson

I can see why, when you said you had characters who wanted to speak, excellent choice to have Lacey and Bruce have this chat. I’m crossing fingers for an okayish outcome for the twins, nothing like Mackenzie levels of forgiveness but at least a new bridge formed. Daphne on the other hand… she’s still a piece of work. Out of all the bitter exes in your stories who have next to 0 redeeming qualities, she ranks well up there (or maybe down below?) in that regard. Amazing chapter as per usual :) looking forward to the next one :D

John Other

I wasn't as descriptive as I wanted to be when Bruce was walking up to Lacey's front door. In my mind I could smell the scene, felt the sun on my face and the emotion that Bruce was feeling. Sitting the cafe, I could see how worn and old the place was (look up Queenslander style homes) and it just felt like a place you wanted to be...

Brian7714

Another excellent chapter. Another chapter to go on my save list.


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