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The Nuclear Family - Chapter 11 - Part II

🕑 Added 2025-10-03 04:41:19 +0000 UTC

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Adam_Sephenson

ok! extended in-depth review time! (spoilers of future events excluded of course!) Oh boy! A lot of additional yummy content here for sure! Compared to the first half of page 1 on lit (yep I checked side by side as usual! XD) this already shows a lot more character development and doesn't have that "we're in a relationship! and hopelessly in love" vibe that the first part of OG chapter 2 had, you've now shown the slow build, which helps in the long run. The gym jealousy was a golden moment; it showed a side to Amy that was lacking in the original, and it works. The fun moments that Robbie and Amy were going to do were unfortunately soured by past memories that the two of them had shared together with Georgia, which was a bold move on your part and has paid off, as the betrayal should still be felt. The dad jokes.... well I've said my part about that in an earlier comment XD those are golden, full stop! XD The extra waffy and cute moments between Robbie and Amy continue to tug at my heart. =) looking forward to next week's update! =D

John Other

You picked it in one, hat scene came from me and my kids doing that exact joke sequence. It got worse and worse and funnier and funnier with each round...

Adam_Sephenson

Aaahhhh, good sweet, young developing love! Thanks for the “dad jokes” there! :D I’ll be sure to use them on my daughter later XD she always cracks up groaning with any I say lmao!


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