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Lucky - Chapter 13, Part III

🕑 Added 2025-10-10 01:18:51 +0000 UTC

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John Other

Thanks, Adam - For reference, Matt was a bit of a background character the day that Brian and Lacey had their coffee in the old coffee shop. I do have a thought around a spin off for their romance, but I have a few other projects to get done first ;)

Adam_Sephenson

Old scars still run deep, between Cameron and Louise (not surprising) Good to see both daughters have learned their lesson so to speak :) I was expecting the worst when you said “caught her out” I was half expecting Lacey to have some kind of drug or needle addict when you were talking about the tidying up of the popcorn or something lol! And I can’t help but think that Matt was a sudden name drop, I’ll have to go back to the other chapters, but was Matt an already introduced character? As it seemed like it was a “here he is” moment, so I could be wrong in this case :D really enjoyed this chapter! And hurrah that the ex and AP are feeling the effects of their choices and the irony that had befallen them. Bruce is aging with grace while Daphne and Anton are drooping and becoming the things they were slating Bruce on :D you gotta love it! Great work one more John! :) onwards to the finale/epilogue!

John Other

She is not a nice person

Brian7714

For a.minute there, I thought Larry's mom was going to mess it up. I'm glad they stopped her.


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