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Lucky, Chapter 15 - Part III - Epilogue

🕑 Added 2025-10-26 11:04:03 +0000 UTC

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Brian7714

WOW!!! Just wow. Just when I couldn't feel bad for Lacey and hate her mother ( Daphne ) any more, she goes and does what she did. Well done, well done indeed.

John Other

Thanks mate - An alt version might be an interesting project in 2026, got a few other stories to get out first ;) I'm glad you picked up on Anton, I purposely wanted everyone to make that assumption. It was my fake-out that would lead us to Torri's passing.

Adam_Sephenson

*stands up and applauds* Wow John, That ending. I had a feeling that there was more to what Torri was leading on with before she became ill, a real shame that it never fully came to fruition. I shed a tear when I read Torri's final letter to Bruce, if you were like me when I came to write my own "last letter" for Aurora in my story, then you would have teared up knowing and thinking of all the possible outcomes that Torri would've experienced together with Jude. As for Daphne, that really does say it all when she won't even take more than a few seconds to see or be curious as to why Lacey would ring up, but knowing her and that type of character that she is, she would've ripped up Torri's words. Your original plan about Lacey and the reconciliation with Torri, that would've been a good side/alternative story to read tbh. I'm not sure what your stance is on writing alternative endings/chapters, but I would be up for reading those chapters you did have planned before swapping it up. I'll admit that I was surprised about Anton! for some reason I had thought he was deceased before the epilogue, I guess I read wrong when it was the funeral and the "his wheelchair wasn't there" moment meant that he had gone long ago, whoops! my bad there! XD an amazing trilogy you've crafted here John =) I look forward to Bruce appearing in "Blood Oath" along with whichever previous characters you've got lurking in the shadows ;)


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