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The Nuclear Family, Chapter 15, Part II

🕑 Added 2025-10-31 04:18:19 +0000 UTC

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John Other

You are correct they were. I was going to work that in ((as most of us would be if you have seen some of the houses on the hill in Noosa that I am talking about. But I wanted to let Darren really get into pushing Robbie in the initial stage. There is some more discussion coming up in Part III about it, but its more 'hey your rich... that's cool..." Kind of down to earth people which makes them so awesome for Robbie and Amy

John Other

I've read it twice since expanding it, and there are still a couple more tweaks i want to do before releasing it next week. I really want everyone to see what I am seeing as they fight.

Brian7714

I can't believe that I'm looking forward to a fictional fight and Robbie kicking his butt.lol

silverthorne

Maybe I'm misremembering....in the original, when Darren and Toni came to the house, wasn't there a bit about how awed they were with the house? With finding out how wealthy Amy was? Of course, it's been quite a while since I last read the original.


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