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Primetime: Chapter 23
🕑 Added 2025-08-31 21:49:40 +0000 UTCHey everyone,
We’re at the crisp end of this month, and as I said earlier, I’ll be posting what I’ve written for Primetime. So here I am sharing Primetime Chapters 23–24 as a double release.
It’s still not complete, and honestly, I’m still not fully happy with it, but I did promise to release it regardless of whether I like it or not.
This document is already sitting at almost* 25k words,* and there are still a few scenes left to write. Some of you might feel a little disappointed, and I understand that. But I’d love to hear your thoughts feel free to drop them in. I’ll keep working on finishing the remaining planned scenes for this arc over the coming days. Of course, I’ll update you all when that’s done.
You can comment here or send DMs or discuss on discord
Thanks for all your support and for being patient with me. Truly grateful. TY all!
Edit: I’ve added the new scene for this chapter as promised, it’s at the end, so you can read it there.
Another note: I plan to wrap up this arc soon, so expect another update later this week, which will include Chapter 25 in this same document.
After that, I’ll split the document into three parts before going public, as always.
Please share your thoughts, additions, and whether you liked it or not.
Edit2: I have split the doc into two chapters this is now chapter 23
Comments
GINxTonic
The final scene was a great addition and excited to see her new “hungry” mindset at play in the coming chapters.
MrVectorPath
I’ve added the new scene for this chapter as promised, it’s at the end, so you can read it there. Another note: I plan to wrap up this arc soon, so expect another update later this week, which will include Chapter 25 in this same document. After that, I’ll split the document into three parts before going public, as always. Please share your thoughts, additions, and whether you liked it or not.
SNagy
Nice setup with her getting more and more into the thrill showing of gives her. Can't wait to see who she fully succumbs to next
MrVectorPath
Ty glad you liked. Yes adding those soon. Yes trapped will be updated as well. Thing is few people commented so and it's patreon only version for now so thought people did not like it
GINxTonic
Good set up in the chapter, can’t wait to read the finished product. Also, is Trapped going to get an update soon as well? Thanks for posting!
MrVectorPath
Doc?
Pizaaaaaa
Can u post it in a different way it’s hard to read
