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TS6 - Chapter 2

🕑 Added 2024-03-12 16:00:10 +0000 UTC

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Michael Cook

"Sorry, I'm just getting anxious again. Have you tried defining whether he's going to be okay or not?" I think this should have been divining not defining.

Andrew Greenberg

"Curious about it, he asked one of the warriors what it was hauling." The second "it" seems to be referring to the warrior, which doesn't fit quite right. A "they" would work better in that case.


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