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Sanura Lineart (Early)

🕑 Added 2022-08-19 03:06:41 +0000 UTC

Comments

The Phoenixian

Something in the shoulder feels a little odd. Deltoid ends a bit high, maybe? Footwraps and cloth faulds on the hip are outright great additions; Swapping out the wrist bangle with a vambrace works well. I also kind of miss Sanura being decked out in jewelry. I was fond the filigree and especially the bangles/ornament just below the shoulder.

Zarkof

not bad, but why does she look like she is leaning her torso back?

DODGE26

Smidge more cleavage

Amaryllis#9

I like how she looks more expressive now. Before she looked more deadpan and serious. I think maybe giving her some hair clips or accessories would help though, it is weird not seeing her with her Scythe though

Funble

This is looking solid, tho there are a few changes/additions I would like to suggest (this gets a little long, sorry): - Sanura's original outfit involves a lot of jewelry. This version has some already, but I think a little more wouldn't hurt. Perhaps exchange the bracers for bracelets? Those would be more fitting for Sanura, in my opinion - Secondly is her top. I feel like it could match the rest of her outfit better, but admittedly I don't know what I would change. Possibly some gold elements in the straps or trim? - Lastly, have her holding her staff/scythe? This would be to make it more clear that she is a magic user. Tho I know that the Leah and Val don't have their weapons, so it would also make sense for Sanura to not wield hers either All that said, what you guys have here is very good already. I definitely wouldn't mind if it made it into the game as is (well, with color lol). Overall, this is great! Can't wait to see the full progression!

I like the redesign overall, looks better. If I could change anything, I would make the Tail Rings a bit tighter. Not overly, but tight enough to look like it wouldn't fall off when she swishes her tail.