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Unorthodox Farming: New Chapter 16
🕑 Added 2026-02-16 11:00:00 +0000 UTCComments
Iain Grubb
Thanks for the chapter :) Possible Edits: Torvac once boasted that for their fiftieth wedding anniversary, Orlana had fed him their youngest grandchild's weight in braise(d) lamb. Capitol > Capital (Capitol is a state building, Capital is the chief/main city of a State/Country. I recognised the (nameplate?) above her head. She was acting like a granddaughter who was about to see_her grandpa get in trouble. She wasn't unattractive, but I doubted she'd ever invest(ed) in charisma.
William Howe
Glad you are able to salvage words already written. Especially glad because this is an awesome sequence.
William Howe
“She was acting like a granddaughter who was about to [seeher] grandpa get in trouble.”—> see her
William Howe
“I recognised the above her head.”—>something missing
Matthew Wilmsmeyer
Glad to hear you've had a good month! Thank you for the chapter, and for keeping the family antics in place.
