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10-16 Interrupted Deception

🕑 Added 2023-04-20 19:50:49 +0000 UTC

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BeatleNerd

'Reclaiming the loci and he formerly subverted was a paltry task' I don't think the "and" is necessary. it should be 'Reclaiming the loci he formerly subverted was a paltry task' 'Shards of glass feel, shattering against the enforcers below.' "feel" should be "fell"


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