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28-8 Opening Arguments (III)

🕑 Added 2024-07-06 12:06:04 +0000 UTC

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Craig

Most of this chapter was honestly amazing. Showing Uthred break in real time was exquisite. If anything, I feel like the last part showing the arrival of the Sparrow whatever should be moved to the next chapter.

Brent Stinebaker

Her heaven is just not that comprehensible. That, and she has a lot more than just one. Her heaven is probably one of the more esoteric ones designed.

Deathly_God

For all the vicarities and publicity the Stormsparrow has, wouldn't her canons and hubris be fairly well known? How can a mercenary be so renown and still useful? Tavers operated with a ton of cloak and dagger shit. Her only media were her "School of the Warrens," thought cast series.

Arcane

Burn the Famine of Emotions, Burn Stormsparrow, burn Uthred and Vator. All must join Symmetry. Also, a new Warmind from Emotion would be nice. Thanks for the chapter!


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