Brent Stinebaker
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1 The Betrayal
🕑 Added 2024-05-16 06:32:23 +0000 UTCAhem. Attention cultivators:
You are all about to die. Someone has rented one of my Towers and about two billion my demons or so to destroy your world.
Now, before you start trying to bargain, understand that this is not a thing of discussion. The matter of your deaths and the apocalypse befalling your world was decided by market forces far beyond you. About… 78 Levels beyond you.
For those of you who intend to fight, well… It will be amusing. Mainly for me. But understand that the System structuring your world is only Lv. 22. The numbers might not make much sense to you, but the demonic legions pouring over your cities and sects and killing everyone should make everything clear.
For what it’s worth, I apologize for the inconvenience. Rotten luck, chaps. A shame too. I rather liked that large tangle of branches wrapping around your world…
-Mepheleon the Harbinger
1
The Betrayal
The world was burning, and all Young Master Wei An Wei could do was watch.
The skies over his sect were coming asunder, tearing as if paper. The sun and clouds were banished from sight, and in their place spread vast rifts for more demons to spill through. Fire flooded down upon the earth, hammering against cracking defensive arrays projected over the sect in haste.
None had been prepared for this moment—it should have been an impossibility. The protections woven over their world should have exorcized all demons that dared enter their atmosphere, thanks to vast and sprawling branches of their Everblossoms. Such was the reason why their world was called Evernest, for the awakened trees shrouded them from the peering eyes and slavering fangs of heaven. But here and now the hells spilled forth, spawning their hordes directly upon the mountain fortress of the Drowned Sky Sect.
The heart from which the Everblossoms flourished.
Cultivators fought alone and in formation, directing animated weapons to spear through swarms of screaming insects, obliterating demonic leviathans trying to squeeze through the tightness of the rifts. Even unprepared, a cultivator remained a cultivator; they were already set upon defying the laws of heaven, what dread did they hold for the legions of hell?
But where valor and virtue shone bright, the honest fact of the matter was that they were but a sinking island trying to fight off an encroaching sea. Cultivators fought, holding their pockets of resistance until the swarms swept over them, and then deliberately invoked tribulation by reaching beyond the expanse of this world—nakedly tried to steal might from the heavens one final time.
Primordial lightning lashed through existence, carving swaths of reality away into nothingness.
The demons kept coming.
Leaving his broken spear lodged in the skull of something between a bull and centipede, Wei cleaved the beast in half with a sweeping kick—stepped through its parted body as he sprinted through the inner hold of his sect. His strength was spent. He needed to cultivate more force from the realm to rejuvenate himself. The walls behind him were crumbling; most of the other disciples his age were fleeing in the opposite direction; families with children fleeing while they could, with even crafters forced to bear their tools as arms against the nightmares spilling into their homes.
He passed through Master Junyi’s garden and nothing of her presence. Perhaps she already escaped. Perhaps the smears of blood leading deeper into the sect weren’t hers.
Bodies littered fine wood floors as Wei continued deeper into his burning home. The inner confines were ablaze. Men, women, children, and awakened beasts lay in piles, slaughtered as one, and joined together in death. The cries of a weeping infant assailed Wei; a father screamed out, looking for his young. Wei kept silent as he passed, but found an aching kinship to the man. He, too, was seeking his kin. His parents—the Sect’s Matriarch and Patriarch—doubtlessly awaited them.
He sought them because he was unsure what to do, and that if it was his fate to die, he would rather face his end beside his blood than alone.
Deeper still, he reached the sect’s inner confines and peered down across vast rungs of interconnected homes surrounding a central mansion at the heart of the mountain. Radiant symbols went out one after another as the final layer of protections crumbled away. The linked houses here belonged to the hundred-names—the Pathless mortals that have served their sect faithfully for centuries.
Already, Wei could see stalking shadows hunting them, laughing shapes made from the fabric of shadows pulling people off into the darkness. Between the streets, the spiritual awakened Everblossom trees were burning—screaming—their radiant petals of violet and red vanishing consumed by fire and made ash. The sprawling channels passing between each home ran still, but flowed as blood rather than water.
Each witnessed defilement bade a sickness to rise within Wei. But he faced the world that was, he accepted the horror as a cultivator should.
He pressed on.
Sprinting through the homes, he was a blur of violence and urgency. Gray skinned imps feasting on the carcass of a dog, splattered apart into tendrils of unnatural ichor, burrowing out of existence as if guided by an unseen needle. He smashed through walls and leaped over collapsed bridges. He steeled his heart and focused only on his goal: to reach the mansion.
With each passing second, his heart ached with thirst. His cultivation was running dry. He would need to mediate and center himself when he reached the mansion. As he passed the final layer of houses, leaving fleeing mortals and shattered demons in his wake, his heart swelled with relief as he laid eyes upon his home.
The joy in him faded, however, as along the pearl-inlaid pathway leading to his home, he watched hellish dogs tear into an old man. The man’s robes were soaked through with blood, and his face was savaged. Wei barely recognized him as he gasped and shuddered, kicking at the three the hellhounds digging their snouts into his guts.
It was his beard that Wei recognized. Flowing and white, with a fashionable curl at the end. “Master Mou Ze!”
He tore across the open path leading to his home, and the dogs froze—pulled their bloodied faces from Mou Ze’s eviscerated body. The old man blinked as focus returned to him one final time. His eyes fell upon Wei, and he swallowed a mouthful of blood as he managed a final grin.
And then Mou Ze’s Spirit rose from his body. Rose high like a cerulean tower reaching through the mountain, reaching past the arrays, the nest, past even the open rift looming above them.
He reached, and Wei sensed what he was doing. “No!”
The dogs managed their first step toward Wei when a sudden shudder pulsed down Mou Ze’s Spirit, disrupting the essence that composed his being. He had touched something far beyond. He had reached beyond the confines of this realm, and alerted something that existed within the ascended realm.
A bolt of energy shaped from monochrome lanced down from a place unseen. Wei felt even before it arrived. It speared into his senses like an impossible Wei, and pierced clean through the mountain as if the stone wasn’t even there. As lightning colored from shifting bright and shadow struck Mou Ze, the hellhounds were caught in its wake as well, consuming all four of their forms in a flash of brilliance.
A shockwave of force swept out across the sect. Wei was flung backward but recovered with a roll, managing to balance himself despite his ringing ears and blinded eyes. As his senses returned, a patch of existence simply no longer was.
Gone was Master Mou Ze. Gone were the hounds devouring him. Gone was a good few meters of ground beneath where they were.
To invoke tribulation was to be unmade by the heavens. All cultivators knew this. All cultivators knew, and Mou Ze chose nothingness rather than risk Wei.
The young master stared at the hollow depression dotting the ground for a heartbeat and repressed the tearing inside of him.
There would be time for funerals later. Or never again. He needed to make the master’s sacrifice worth it. He needed to get home.
Springrise Mansion was named so because of its composition. Created Wei Jing Quan, Matriarch of the Drowned Sky Sect, some seven centuries ago, it resembled the joining of several Everblossom trees molded together, forming walls and rooms with their trunks while branches continued to climb, spearing through even the stone of their mountain stronghold itself. Upon the wood burned scripts infused with the essence of cultivation, and they invoked command’s directly upon one’s Spirit using via a pressure few could resist.
In times of peace, such was where elders and inner disciples were invited to converge and cooperate, or see their disputes resolved properly by the Matriarch and Patriarch’s wisdom. Through the Everblossoms, Wei watched his mother and father reshape the world, unleash edicts and alter arrays to aid peasants in their harvest, forcing clouds to weep and soil to ripe. In times of war, they likewise channeled their techniques through the trees, focusing their protections through arrays and symbols.
A creeping question gnawed at Wei, then. Why hadn’t his parents reacted if their home was still intact? He could still sense the essence rippling from the Everblossoms, flowing across their sect. Why hadn’t they shrunken the perimeter’s defenses before expanding it once more to banish the scourge?
He would get no answers ruminating alone. Sprinting up the steps, he charged for the coiling vines growing over the front gates to his home. They retracted upon sensing his approach and he slammed through the bronze lacquered doors, offering not even a faint apology to the painted door guardians in his haste.
The moment he plunged into the inner courtyard, he knew something was wrong. The mansion was silent and empty. Wei never remembered it being so. He thought about calling out, but thought better of it. He didn’t know what threats might be lurking, despite how intact it seemed. Taking a moment to center himself, he planted a hand against a passing branch of wood and exhaled.
All cultivators knew how to meditate. Such was how one centered themselves in the turbulent sea that was the world, drew in the currents of discord before refining it, nourished their spirits by purifying chaos into order. Though but a youth of fifteen years, Wei’s highest blessing by birthright and training had been focus. Unshakable focus.
His mind emptied with a thought, and he found himself hovering in a miasma of chaos. Streams of flowing essence washed through the Everblossoms around him, and their voluminous puissance made the gray haze that colored his spirit seem little more than contaminated swill.
His masters often told him that he was a gifted—a generational talent. Though such was what they said, he didn’t know how that could be true when his mother and father were capable of producing such purity through their cultivation. Though his spirit thirsted, he controlled himself, internalized the essence into himself at a trickle. That was as much as he could process at a time without shattering his own Nascent Spirit, but even as he did so, he had to resist the siren call to drink deeper, to draw in more power from deeper waters.
Moments of calm presented instances of greatest danger to a cultivator, for they were the refiners of existence. Many a disciple had reached beyond the expanse of this realm before they were ready, sought to steal spiritual essence from the world beyond—a world where the ascended, gods, and titans lurked.
Almost none managed to claim the pure, raw power that lay just beyond the confines of their atmosphere. For those that strayed into the deep, what they reaped was cleaving lightning from the heavens itself—the mighty unmaking the weak for daring to trespass before their time.
Time and time again, Wei heard the call. Time and time again, he resisted it.
Where most disciples his age were two stages behind, struggling to set their foundations, Wei had awakened his Nascent Spirit just two days prior to the invasion—and taken his first true step on the climb to ascension.
It was supposed to be a cause worth celebrating. His mother even granted him one of her rare smiles. Now, he would settle for getting out of this mess alive.
Drawing essence from the Everbloom, he ignored the feeling of guilt as the complexities of his parents’ spirits dissolved upon greeting his, colors vanishing into dull grayness, but he needed power for what was to come.
As he felt himself filled, he released a final exhale and returned to the world.
The mansion was still silent, still empty. A string was pulling up at his guts, and a drum of dread hammered in his chest.
He strode forth through the courtyard, taking care to follow the stone path and avoid treading upon his father’s garden. The wings to his left and right had their door closed. Wei frowned as he wondered where the animated constructs were, but pressed forward, seeking the central quarters where he and his parents spent their nights.
Immediately, something was different. The door was halfway ajar, its bass, ring-shaped handle twisted slightly as if released mid-pull. Gathering his courage, Wei pushed the door open and stepped forth.
And was stopped dead with a single step.
Before him on the ground lay a severed head, its eyes still open, the irises bright green, the mouth slightly ajar. Its hair remained tied in neat tassels, with a crystalline hair pin holding it in place—something his father had gifted his mother during their courtship.
Seconds passed, and Wei stared on, mind unable to process the scene before him. Somewhere deep inside, he knew he was staring at his mother’s decapitated head, and a trail of blood led but a few strides beyond where her body lay unmoving. Over it stood his father, one of the man’s palm pressed against the trunk of a sprawling tree, channeling the will of his spirit through its branches.
In his other hand shimmered a Shapeless Blade, only made visible because of the blood coating its length.
Blood.
His mother’s blood.
Reality slammed down upon Wei like a hammer greeting an anvil, breaking him from his fugue. He broke into motion, taking his mother’s face into his shaking hands. Absurd as it was, he reached into her using his spirit, yearned to find something there.
A shade of color.
A semblance of life.
Nothing.
Just emptiness.
Just death.
A noise escaped Wei before he could stop it. There was no coherence to the note, no meaning beside pain. His mother would never watch him train again, instruct him, smile at him, chide him for bullying the outer court disciples, slap his hand for forgetting decorum when they ate together.
His mother was gone.
His mother was gone.
His mother was gone.
And his father killed her.
Something inside Wei shattered. What was a cry of grief broke into a note of incomprehensible rage. “Why?” he said, barely whispering the word. “Why?”
He watched his father’s reel back from the tree, spinning to bring his blade to bear. The man froze as he faced Wei, his face an ashen mask of misery, eyes red from weeping.
For a passing heartbeat, they stood there, the father with a technique pointed at his son, the son holding the remains of his mother for the last time.
People often said he resembled his father more than his mother. Aside from inheriting the hue of her eyes, father and son shared most other features—strong jaw, pronounced bones, wild, flowing hair. Somehow, that made this all hurt infinitely worse.
“Why?” Wei managed again, a growl seeping into his voice this time.
The man before him sagged with exhaustion as he looked upward and away from Wei. “I did all that you asked… not him too. You said you would—I did as you asked!” The shout that erupted from Yu Wu Wen was uncharacteristic of him. He was a figure defined by calmness and focus. But the creature before Wei was nothing but weariness and fury. With words spoken, his father crumbled in on himself, and sighed. “You said I wouldn’t need to make this choice. You said he would never lay eyes on me again.”
It took Wei a second to realize his father was speaking to him. “What? What are you talking about? Why did you—”
“There was no choice,” Yu Wu Wen repeated, all expression vanishing from his face, focus reasserting itself. “This was a moment demanded by a will beyond our own. I am sorry, Wei. I did not want this. But it matters so little what we want.”
Wei’s confusion only grew with each passing word. He didn’t even realize that he had placed his mother’s head down on the ground as he staggered close to his father. His head was spinning, red was creeping in the corner of his vision, his fists clenched and unclenched, tightening in pace to the thundering in his heart.
“I will not make you suffer,” Yu Wu Wen said, stifling a quiver. “I will not. That is all I can give you. I didn’t—”
But Wei was on him first, a son seeking the life of his father to avenge his mother; a Nascent Spirited boy facing a master on the verge of true ascendancy—the eighth and final step before one became an immortal proper.
In the end, it was as if a worm trying to claim the life of a hawk.
Wei blurred, channeling every bit of his essence into Speed. He strode and pivoted right, sought to provoke his father into missing a strike. But Yu Wu Wen was no outer disciple fool, and skill was the smallest gulf between father and son. Wei might as well have been standing still when his father drove his Shapeless Blade through his heart.
The boy lurched. His mouth filled with copper, and his heart—the muscle containing his Nascent Spirit—shrieked as it struggled to beat. His father’s face contorted in repressed horror as he banished his blade, stumbling back as he took in his dead. Blood welled out from Wei’s chest, painting the whites of his broad and gush down his body. He coughed a spray of crimson phlegm, mortally wounded, mind dangling at the precipice of madness, spirit punctured and leaking essence.
“I’m sorry,” Yu Wu Wen muttered, offering worthless apology after worthless apology.
In that moment, Wei learned what it truly meant to hate someone. He didn’t know if it was emotion or the last bits of his ruptured spirit that gave him the force to keep standing, to take another step toward the man. All he knew was that he needed to kill the man.
If it was the last thing he did.
And on the verge of insanity, a plan formed in his mind. A desperate plan that would see their family reunited in death.
Wei cast a glance at his mother’s head one final time. Forgive me, mother, for what I am about to do to your Everblossoms. What I will do to our world.
It was a ridiculous thing to do, but with mind drifting, one final acknowledgement of his filial piety seemed right to him.
Clenching a fist, he strode forward, ostensibly seeking to land a blow on his father. The man just sighed as he dodged, reaching out as Wei crumbled with a choked gasp, embracing his son one final time. “It will be over soon. It will be calm soon. Go. Go be with your mother. She should not depart alone.”
Wei spat blood over his father’s shoulder, and gripped the back of the man’s neck with his left hand. Pulling feebly, he forced his father to meet his gaze, hatred matching sorrow as he spoke: “I will kill you for this… no matter how many lives it takes… no matter how far you flee… no matter how high you ascend… I will find you… I will kill you… I will turn all you love to ash…”
And with each word of loathing he spat, his father broke, his expression wilting further and further until he was on the brink of tears once more. And as the man was distracted by his own torment, Wei reached with his other hand, and pressed his palm against the trunk of the Everblossom just behind his father.
For one last time, Wei mastered himself—against all odds, he quieted his mind.
No more did his mother’s death matter.
No more did his on impending end concern him.
All there was in existence was his wounded spirit spilling free into the Everblossom, and the siren call of tribulation beyond.
This time, unlike all the times before, Wei didn’t resist. Instead, he reached, groped deeper as he ignored all there was to refine himself in this realm, and sank his will into the heavens beyond.
Faintly, he heard a rising cry of alarm someplace distant. But that mattered no more. Deeper still he rose, deeper still he drank, deeper, until he felt another presence reach back and seize him. And then they struck.
Wei felt the blow coming before it arrived—a strike that made all existence shudder, that traveled countless leagues to grant him desired ruin. He opened his eyes, and grinned wide as he beheld his father’s disbelieving gaze. He clenched the back of the man’s neck tighter. “A Patriarch,” Wei began, “should not leave his family. Come with us.”
And just before a bolt of falling tribulation split through the demonic rift and cleaved the mountain fortress of the Drowned Sky Sect in twain, the space around the twosome tore open as a force pulled them both through.
Wei was torn from his father’s embrace, but never once did he release his hold on the Everblossoms.
Roiling chaos enveloped them both, monochromatic essence bleeding into their Spirits, dissolving them utterly. Wei felt himself unravel but managed a grin of vicious triumph as he beheld the same fate claiming his father.
The emotion was short-lived.
Though the brightness that composed his father’s Spirit withered from existence, the man did not die, nor did he even seem particularly affected. Worse yet, the monochrome only consumed him in Spirit but not flesh, while Wei found himself devoured in totality.
Adrift in this miasma—this sea of chaos, Wei strained and struggled, tried to resist the end. His father merely gazed at him, eyes burning with despair. He reached out for Wei, but then pulled his hand back, mouthing something, some kind of apology, some kind of request.
It didn’t matter. It was worthless. Wei didn’t want to hear the words, he wanted to watch the man die. Why had the heavens protected the man even now? Why were denying Wei even this? His final vengeance.
Just then, the monochromatic ocean parted behind Yu Wu Wen, and Wei glimpsed a flare of the sun along the corner of his right eye. A cleft of atmosphere suddenly manifested in the chaotic expanse, and a shape of looming obsidian, glass, and bronze drifted close from behind a veil of crimson haze.
As it swept closer, Wei tasted fire, brimstone, and sulfur. Heard a chorus of laughter. Saw swarms of demons swirling the skies, massive leviathans coiling around the structure while small nightmares festered around it bees to a hive. They were thousands. Missions. And they came spilling forth from the many gateways that lined the sides of the tower, some slipping out from painted glass as well.
The tower was immense, so large it possessed its own pull. As Wei and his father were drawn close, they turned in space, and the young master gazed down to where the tower made its descent, and his heart clenched with pain once more. The edifice was plunged through breaking arrays, splitting clean through the grand branches coiled around a burning world.
Evernest. Home. Wei’s home. The tower was plunging deeper and deeper into his crust. Fissures parting continents spread wide, and essence began to well forth from the planetary realm like blood from an arterial spray.
A crackling noise pulled Wei’s attention back to his father, and he saw two shapes approaching the man from the backdrop of the tower. Twin figures of hellish array-scrawled armor approached, their helmeted skulls spewing plumes of fire in the shape of an inverted cross, their weapons blades of slick, wet flesh, their plates formed from bone and blackened steel, and their six wings spread wide like clouds of ash.
They reached out and took Yu Wu Wen under the arms, carried him back toward the tower, back into the haze of red.
Wei cried out, fought his weightlessness to reach the man, howling for any to heed his cries, offering all oaths to see vengeance done.
But as his father was taken close to the tower, the crevice parting the monochrome began to like waves crashing down into a valley, and Wei’s heart burned with incomprehensible rage.
Somehow, for whatever reason, his father had been spared the touch of the monochromatic taint, had been spared of tribulation, had been saved by a force residing in the heavens.
All this, while Wei was condemned to die. All this, while his mother was dead. All this while his realm burned.
Vengeance was undone, and shadow and light between to crawl over Wei’s eyes. His mind was fading, and his Nascent Spirit was almost entirely gone. There was nothing left. Nothing but acceptance and peace.
…
No.
No.
No.
A fury ignited in Wei, a desperate, vicious anger that was beyond though, beyond enduring. It was a fundamental truth that reigned within him, a hate that needed to be fulfilled.
In his fist was branch of the Everblossom, still clutched, still filled with essence. Reaching in, he drew from it, refined using his bitter loathing alone as focus. It was all he could do to stop the monochrome from eating what remained of him, but even then, it seemed to do little good.
His body was near blended with the surrounding chaos. In seconds, he would no longer be able to tell where he began, and it ended.
Yet, Wei struggled against it; fought. For though he was but just a dying boy who knew it to be hubris to internalize the sea, he was born a cultivator, and as such he would die as one as well. There, in wrestling against the havoc of chaos, Wei remembered laying in his mother’s embrace, watching her paint the world outside using a brush as she told him what it meant to strive for immortality.
“It is our nature to ascend, to yearn for the heavens, to rise in defiance of titans and gods. If the price for failure was destruction, then what was lost? When death is fated, then the act of seeking immortality can only be a reward. So. Seek the stars, my son. Know the limitations of the heavens, and rise in spite of them. And above all, let your virtues shine, though tribulations fall.”
And as the chaos pushed inward to his Spirit one final time, Wei reached back out in a final act of defiance. Reaching as far and vast as he could through whatever remained of the Everblossoms. Reaching to seek a proper end befitting a cultivator.
Then, another presence reached out to him. Reached out across the Everblossoms. Reached out and projected an image of a broken shell into his mind—a portrait of another thread of light leaving his shattered world.
Text filled his perception while incomprehensible power flooded his being. The monochrome continued to pour into him, but a thin threshold formed around his body, creating a border of separation between him and the surrounding miasma.
Drip by drip, something flowed across the Everblossom he was still clinging to and filled his broken Spirit once more.
Potential Host Detected
Organism Identified: Human - Subspecies [Cultivator/Trespasser]
Estimating Foundational Aspect Thresholds
Strength: [Error: Severe Conceptual Damage detected]
Speed: [Error: Severe Conceptual Damage detected]
Mind: [Error: Severe Conceptual Damage detected]
Awareness: [Error: Severe Conceptual Damage detected]
Constitution: [Error: Severe Conceptual Damage detected]
Will: [Error: Unable to quantify host’s limitations]
Source Corruption: 99.8%
Risk of Host Rejection: 0%
Beginning [System-Designation Keter “Concept-Breaker] Integration
Reconstructing host’s Nascent Spirit to Source Core
Repairing Foundational Aspects
What… What is this? Wei thought, a semblance of coherence returning to him.
A new color slithered into the trickle that remained of Wei’s Nascent Spirit, changing the once gray haze into a reflective pool of shifting hues, changing between blackness and white.
Do you wish to live?
Yes, Wei answered without hesitation.
Do you accept this request for immediate System-Symbiosis?
Wei didn’t understand, but he agreed regardless. Anything. He would give anything to see his vow fulfilled, to see his father’s betrayal undone. Yes!
Acknowledged. System-Designation Keter integrating with host’s conceptual structure
Suddenly, Wei felt a surge of power rush into him, igniting him in mind, body, and spirit.
Host condition critical. Initiation temporary System Ascension protocols!
System Ascension > [GATE] 4
Aspect Advanced to Conceptual Threshold
Strength Ascended > Authority
Speed Ascended > Relativity
Mind Ascended > Enlightenment
Awareness Ascended > Omniscience
Will Ascended > Intent
Suddenly, the drowning chaos stopped trying to consume him. And Wei suddenly found himself able to see through it. No longer was it an incoherent haze washing him from existence, but a member of some kind—a threshold that contained all worlds and dimensions. His Nascent Spirit melted away then, but the monochrome pulled back from his flesh as if he was re-emerging from deep waters.
Around him, all became clear. He saw the brilliant flaring of dawn over his world, sensed the distance between him and the burning giant of gas, sensed the distance between him and his crumbling world, sensed and saw the tower once more, its shape enshrouded in a haze of red.
Following it up, Wei felt his mind go empty as he beheld a truly staggering sight. A massive ring drifted over him like a shadow. The tower was miniscule by comparison, a structure extended as if from a pinhole-sized port. So vast was its size that it dwarfed the sun by many times. This, Wei felt too. This, he somehow intrinsically knew.
Shaking himself free from awe, he clawed at the empty space he drifted in, but still found himself unable to move. He was weightless. There was nothing to push off of. Nothing to.
Destroy the Concept of [Distance] between you and the tower’s base.
What? Wei thought, not understanding.
Estimating Distance: 30.3 Million Kilometers
Obstructions: 0
Conflicting Laws of Reality or Adversarial Systems: 0
Threshold Established
Calculating Targeted Conceptual Structure…
Focus your Aspect of Intent on the distance.
Wei’s mind went blank for a moment, and then he did as the unknown entity asked. He harnessed his focus once more, but himself able to project it—externalize his willpower. It left his body in the form of a reaching arm of solidified monochrome, shooting fast across the impossible distance as details and sensations flooded Wei’s mind. When he finally touched the base of the tower, he felt a sudden pressure push him back—but no matter. A stretch of reality had already been separated from the whole.
He could feel the shape of existence against rubbing against his projected Intent, the very concepts of reality becoming tangible structures to him, as if laws were pillars, as if both the material and metaphorical were both clay.
The projected hand slammed hard near the base of the tower, and Wei felt another presence respond to him. He swallowed but held his focus. What then?
Conceptual Structure Calculated
Concept-Integrity of [Distance]: 1,500/1,500 Integrity Points
Break the concept of distance. Unmake the space between you and your destination.
Whatever Wei expected to hear, it wasn’t that. Still, he turned his projected will into a fist, and he lashed out, striking with spirit and body both. A corona of monochrome resonated from his body, and its vibration spread across existence itself. Wei channeled a might he never knew into his blow. He struck with his material fist first, striking the gulf of space he held in his awareness. His projected fist then immediately struck thereafter, knuckles striking the bedrock of conceptual reality.
For the first time, Wei felt reality crack. Wei felt a concept fracture.
Concept-Integrity of [Distance]: 1,400/1,500 Integrity Points
Fractured, but still holding. Wei lashed out again and felt himself lurch forward slightly; unnaturally. Again, he cast out a fist, and again he felt his damage strike a structure rooted someplace deeper than even the realm of the spiritual and arcane. Numbers and text splashed across his vision, with each blow subtracting 100 points from the Concept-Integrity of distance itself.
The feat was mad—impossible. But it was working. Blow after blow, he felt conceptual reality sunder beneath his fists evermore, his hands blurring, his being flaring as he unloaded his fury in a torrent of rage. Through it all, every time he struck, his very being vibrated, and existence resonated thereafter, briefly painting all there was with a monochrome canvas that faded thereafter like an echo. There, he saw a crack forming between him and the tower, the lines spreading wider, deeper.
Concept-Integrity of [Distance]: 300/1,500 Integrity Points
His final three punches lashed out in a chain, and he felt force flow out from him like nothing he ever knew. When the last hit landed, the space ahead of burst apart in a rupture of colors, and Wei sudden felt the reality space separating him from his goal vanish.
There was no transition. He did not travel through space. He did not accelerate forward. 30 million kilometers simply ceased to be between Wei and his destination, and the next thing he felt was heat, was atmosphere, was wind running through his hair. Gasping, clouds splashed apart against Wei’s vision, and a final line of text drifted across his eyes.
Threshold Reserves Expended
Temporary System Ascension protocol disabled
Defaulting all Aspects to [Foundational]
“Wait!” Wei cried out, surprised to hear his own voice again, but the System wasn’t responding, and he didn’t get to ask anything else as a bolt of crimson lightning whipped out and cleaved him from the sky.
Brightness and pain filled Wei’s mind. Brightness, pain, and looming unconsciousness. But as he fell, the clouds broke around him, and he caught sight of his target—the tower; his father.
And so fell Wei An Wei, the once Young Master of the Drowned Sky Sect, into the embrace of the Claimed Hells of Diaspora; into a den of depravity and virtue; into a house of schemes and sin. Into a realm between realms, a nation between worlds; in pursuit of personal revenge, and soon after, retribution against the System-hosts that ruled existence themselves.
THOUGH
TRIBULATION
FALLS
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Brent Stinebaker
Apologies. Will try doing that
DuB
Just starting on these chapters and looking forward to it! Also wanted to echo the comment on tags, they're really the only way to organize and sort through all this while reading on patreon (or "Collections" I'd assume), and it looks like the tags have been a bit inconsistent so far (seems like 8, 11, and 12 are tagged to "Main Story" at this time).
Tenpoundtarantula
Heya. Thanks for this. Is there any chance you could tag the new stories or group them into collections please? I'm following a number of authors and just trying to keep the stories etc distinct in my head (and in my inbox) as the numbering on the through tribulation falls tags threw me
Wanderingforworks
Excited to see this new universe!
Brent Stinebaker
Time for some major narrative + character enhancements for TTF. Other chapters will be updated soon. Godclads chapter next.
